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7/31 c14 Guest
Do you do requests? I have one. Instead of Aaron helping Callie after she cuts up her senior project it is either Lena or Stef. But I hope Lena since she is home more often and she helps Callie through it.
7/30 c14 Guest
Please update. Maybe you can write another story where Lena is Callie's bio mama and she has a twin brother Caleb and they are a year younger than B and their dad is Robert Quinn and she left him after being a lesbian and she meets Stef when B is five and the twins are four and years later they take in Jesus, Mariana, Jude and Isabella who are twins.
7/19 c14 Guest
please update
6/18 c14 Guest
Please update. Hope all three kids can understand each other's feelings. But every time Mariana is called out on her behavior she starts to feel guilty and the moms tend to give in to her. I know they don't blame her, but if she never lied and snuck around Stef never would have been shot. B has a right to his feelings.
4/13 c14 Guest
I hope the talk comes soon and all three kids understand they are still family but B is right in this and has a right to feel angry. The moms need to understand they can't always let them slide.
2/24 c14 8meyouthem123
Nice to see you still working on this story.
You really do keep the focus away from Callie these last few chapters. keeping us on our toes about her, how that whole thing is going to progress. Excited to see how the story will progress and what's to come. Thank you for writing and sharing. Wishing you all the best :)
2/9 c14 Guest
I don't like how all the times the twins do things it all gets swept under the rug or the fact that hey feel guilty and the moms make it up to them. Mariana is the way she is because the moms feel bad for them. I hope Stef understands B in this more than the twins. Yes they are a family, but family can't sneak around and lie and when something goes bad because of said lie the twins act like outsiders when someone outs their behavior.
2/9 c14 Guest
I feel the moms need to dedicate some time to Callie after they talk with the kids.
2/8 c14 Guest
After this story maybe you can write one where Lena is Callie's bio mama and Callie was sold to the foster care system by Dana who thought Lena was too young to get pregnant and she comes back when she is almost 16 and she is being fostered and the moms find out who Callie really is and they move on as a family. No Brallie.
2/4 c14 Guest
I'm for B in this. If the twins never lied or went behind the moms backs Stef never would have been in that house.
1/20 c14 Guest
I want Stef to realize that if she had died, B would end up with Mike and not Lena.
1/20 c14 Guest
I would like for the twins to understand where B is coming from. And for the B to um
understand where they are coming from but I still feel the moms can't always give in to the twins if they do something wrong and constantly have to give in to them all the time. If roles had been reversed how would the twins feel if B had lied and Stef got shot? Also if Stef would have died what would have happened to the family? B with Mike? And the twins with Lena?
10/30/2020 c14 scorpun
Thanks for the update. I think Lena’s idea to sit down with Brandon and the twins is a good idea. I just don’t know if they will open up and be honest with them.
10/30/2020 c14 Guest
Can you write one where Callie is adopted by Lena as a baby before she meets Stef and B?
10/23/2020 c14 Guest
Want the moms to realize how Callie is feeling and how they will respond to her and if they are going to get adopted or not. She feels insecure after all and wonder how Jude feels.
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