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5/9/2020 c11 DainBramagedMoFo
This chapter wasn't bad. It's funny to pay bags of riyo to bad people just befor killing them all taking wealth away while getting your own money sacks back. Thanks, be well and stay safe.
3/29/2019 c11 3Archilles
kind
2/25/2019 c11 A Fan
PLEASE add more to this story, the waiting is literally killing me! This story is too awesome to be left in the shadows of the ignored or forgotten.
2/25/2019 c11 Sci-Fi Fantasy
I have an awesome idea for Naruto forces, I suggest Arbiter and Atriox and the whole Covenant army to be on Naruto's side. Arbiter and Atriox are both awesome and epic warriors, and the Covenant army is full of powerful aliens with technology and weapons beyond anything the Elemental Nations have. Also, I've never seen a Naruto/ Halo crossover where Naruto is allied with the Covenant.
1/31/2019 c11 6Lucius Walker
Hm, a mega crossover type fic. Gotta say, it's kinda interesting so far. Hope to read some more soon!

(By the way, I don't really think that you need to turn any characters into dark elves, just saying.)

Happy writing!
12/4/2018 c11 NaruOriga
PLEASE, update this story! The waiting is killing us. This story is so good.
11/11/2018 c11 Teamwork EXTREME
When Naruto signs the Xenomorph contract, I think that he should have a Xenomorph partnered with him, like Gamakichi in canon. But not just any Xenomorph, and not the Queen or Predalien, I am talking about the Tarkatan Xenomorph from "Mortal Kombat X"! Why? Because he is awesome! This Xenomorph has bigger teeth and blades coming out of his wrists because of his Tarkatan host. And he fights like a savage beast!

Please add this guy in, he would be awesome and valuable for Naruto's plans. Plus, I don't think any one has used him yet in stories, you can be the first.
11/10/2018 c11 Red Spy
I know someone who would be a very great warrior to be part of Naruto's and Origashaku-sama's forces and kingdom: Scorpion from "Mortal Kombat"! He is a very skilled, powerful, and intimidating warrior. Please consider him!
11/6/2018 c11 Beast Master
I really like that Naruto has Ripper, the Indoraptor, as a pet and stead. However, the only problem with him is that he his limited to the ground. Ripper won't be of any help if Naruto is going up against giant Toad or Bird Summons or against Deidara's Clay Dragon. Which is why, I suggest that Naruto gets another stead, one for the air, a dragon! But, not any dragon, and not Smaug, I am talking about Deathwing, from "World of Warcraft: Cataclysm"!

Deathwing is this massive dragon, as big as a mountain! He was nearly killed long ago, until a group of people found him and reforged back together in lava and hot steel! After being reforged, he soon took to the skies and forever changed the landscape with just a morning flight! This dragon is so metal(LOL), that he is a complete monster! Plus, with his scary appearance and Naruto's armor, he would fit perfectly to being Naruto's flying stead.

Please strongly give this beast some thought, please consider him.
11/5/2018 c11 Romance Freak
I think that the next time that Naruto has a LEMON with Origashaku-sama and Chloe, Naruto and Chloe should double-team on Origashaku-sama. Have Naruto and a couple clones mate with her while Chloe goes for Origashaku-sama's butt, breasts, and ears... then after that Origashaku-sama and Naruto double-team on Chloe and got at her 10x more.
11/7/2018 c11 Dominus1389
You can use corpses of decesed Samurai and Thugs have Origa Yokai mixed with Darkness create The Foot Clan out of them with the living that accept to join turn them in Yokai some in Dark Elfs Naruto could use upgrade and change also like him turning in Dark elf too with Yokai and Darkness like Origa being 100% perfect for recreating Dark elfs and Uzumakis skin color same as Chloe,silver hair, red eyes with a slit (cuz kyuubi),whisker marks can become markings like Tobiramas,pointy ears and looking like 18 yrs old also upgrade his package to 10inch when he reaches look alike 21 give him 13inch :P
11/4/2018 c11 Idea Guy
Could I make one suggestion for Naruto's harem, please? I would very much love to see Mana Tatsumiya, from "Negima", turned into a Dark Elf by Origashaku-sama and part of Naruto's harem please. She is so super awesome, especially with a gun, and isn't used a lot.

Please consider her, she would be a valuable addition to the harem.
11/2/2018 c11 5Fox Boss
My main problem with Naruto going by Shredder is that he's using it like a name, rather than a title.
11/1/2018 c11 Beast Master
Have you considered the Locust, from "Gears of War" games, being part of Origashaku-sama's army? They are powerful and brutal monsters with great firepower, strength, and war beasts. And unlike the horny monsters from Kuroinu, the Locust care only about surviving and fighting, instead of what girl they are going to rape next.

As for "how" they would get there, I have two ideas: The first is that Naruto and Origashaku could use her portal magic to travel to the Locust dimension. The second is that the Locust have always been in Naruto's world, they were just hidden underground.

Please consider this, the Locust would make an amazing and powerful force to add to the new Dark Elf Kingdom's army.
11/2/2018 c11 5Mr.unknow
Nico robin, would she be apart of the dark elves harem or he with itachi?
10/31/2018 c11 Uncle
No really, forget about the Talismans. Since Naruto already has the Shadowkhan, he should gain even stronger powers then those 12 little rocks. I am looking forward to seeing what kinda powers and bloodlines that Naruto will get.
10/30/2018 c11 Guest
So, Fu and Yugito are going to become Dark Elves (and get BUSTIER during the Transformation)!?
10/30/2018 c11 Writing Warrior
If Nico Robin is in here, will we see things like mermaids and giants too? Oh my gosh! I just thought of something- If Origashaku manages to turn humans into Dark Elves, could she do the same thing to creatures like mermaids? Turn them into Dark Elf hybrids? A Dark Elf mermaid sounds extremely beautiful.
10/30/2018 c11 Battle Freak
I hope that the Mantis Khan and Mini Khan get their time in battle soon, they are the only ones we haven't seen fight yet.
10/30/2018 c11 Lemon LOVER
I get the feeling that Chloe's crazed Witchblade side is going to come into play during her time with Naruto. Oh man, I think that they are going to go at it all night with Chloe no doubt pregnant with more then one child.
10/30/2018 c11 Monster Tamer
I would love to see Naruto also get a Summoning Contract to summon Digimon. That could be awesome. Naruto having that ability to summon both Xenomorphs and Digimon would be awesome!
10/30/2018 c11 The Question
Nico Robin from "One Piece" is in here? Who else is going to show up? Also, what is Origashaku-sama going to do to them?
10/30/2018 c11 Story Artist
After Tsunami was nearly a victim of those creeps, I can't imagine how angry that she, Inari, and Tazuna are going to be very angry towards Kakashi and his team for leaving her by herself.
10/30/2018 c11 Idea Guy
This was an interesting chapter. My only problem is that this chapter was really rushed. The slave auction should've been attacked after a few slaves were bought/saved by Itachi, then that should've sparked anger into the buyers before Naruto showed up like a knight to free everyone and beat every buyer in the auction.

But, will be looking forward to see who all was saved at the auction and what kinda creatures were rescued too, and what will happen to all of them.

I am also really excited to see both, Naruto's alone time with Chloe, and the Battle at the Bridge.
10/30/2018 c11 4Monster King
Great story
10/28/2018 c11 2Charles Ceaser
Awesome chapter. Please update soon.
10/27/2018 c11 SPark681
Hmm, nice chapter glad Naruto was able to free those slaves and save them anyways keep up the great work!
10/27/2018 c11 3Eternity456
Sweet chapter interesting how you had yugito there I thought it would just be Fuu. Now there are 3 jinchuriki with uzu and a bunch may become youkai. I also look forward to future sexy times.
10/27/2018 c11 darth56
this was a good chapter i mean it is a great story so how can you go wrong if you just keep it up and again thank you for your work thanks
10/26/2018 c11 Stratos263
Yep gato is screwed
10/26/2018 c11 bladetri
like XD
10/26/2018 c11 61Perseus12
The Liberation of Wave Country has BEGAN!

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