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Thanks, online sister!
1/2 c332 RolePlayer48
Okay, now, I'm just generally concerned at this point. Online sister, are you okay? Again, not rushing. Just concerned.
12/31/2020 c332 RolePlayer48
You're forgiven, online sister! Hugs, cookies and hot cocoa for days! Let me know when you'll get back to it soon!
12/29/2020 c331 RolePlayer48
Thanks, online sister! I'll be sure to give Spitfire a snowball fight she'll never forget! See you soon!
12/29/2020 c330 RolePlayer48
Thanks!
12/28/2020 c329 RolePlayer48
So...Christmas. Was it the best Christmas ever or the worst Christmas ever? Well, to tell you the truth, it was a bit of a mixture of both best AND worst for me. Mostly worst. Why worst? Well, it's embarrassing to say, but I somehow managed to make myself sick again simply by eating a little too much Christmas dinner. And it was pizza too. Something I wouldn't normally get sick from. I mean, I'll admit that I had a little more than my usual amount at dinnertime, and...I may or may not have already eaten two chocolate Yule logs for lunch pudding that very same day, but COME ON! It's Christmas! LOTS of people eat more than they should around this time of year and THEY never get sick from eating that much, right?! I swear it's as if the universe just HATES me or something because this is the kind of luck I've been having since last year when I got really, really sick for unknown reasons! It's almost like I'm still not fully better since that day and that's not true! I've been feeling much better since then! So, why do I keep feeling like I'm going to be sick EVERY time I eat now?! I mean, it's probably just indigestion every time it happens, but THIS didn't even FEEL like indigestion this time! I almost threw up a few times! Thankfully, I didn't. But STILL!

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(Sighs) So, long story short, I hope your Christmas was much better than mine, online sister, because mine was just...awful. Granted, I did get a lot of great gifts this year, but not even they could properly make up for the sickness I somehow managed to suffer from. I'm starting to feel a lot better than I was though. But like before, I'm afraid of eating again in case it results in instant sickness like it did LITERALLY three days ago.

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So...anything to cheer me up, online sister? Or am I supposed to wait until next year when the holidays are all over? Because this says you'd be going back to fix a certain mistake after Christmas is over, but I'm not really sure whether or not you meant after the Christmas holidays or literally after Christmas Day. Seriously, no offence, but you really need to learn to be a bit more specific sometimes.
12/24/2020 c329 RolePlayer48
Thanks, online sister! Sorry if I sounded a little harsh earlier. Hope you have a Merry Christmas! Bye for now! Hugs for days!
12/22/2020 c328 RolePlayer48
Okay, here we go! Hope I'm mentally prepared enough for this! So, let's do this! Together!

Just one thing to remember before we start though, online sister. I can't possibly rewrite this episode all on my own. I will be needing your help with each chapter as my writing style for "Keep Calm and Flutter On" probably won't be as good as how you originally wrote it. There's also a chance I may have to ask you to take care of a few things for me in some places if you're okay with that. Anyway, with all that aside, let's get to writing this story the way it was SUPPOSED to be written, shall we? Let's go!

Disclaimer: The following is a rewrite of Dede42's original version of "Keep Calm and Flutter On". Why is this being rewritten? Well, for those who don't know this yet, the original "Keep Calm and Flutter On" was okay, but unfortunately, it suffered a LOT of problems after the first chapter. At first, I was promised there would be more changes to the story that would fit more to my liking, but once the next few chapters were posted, I was pretty disappointed with what I got. Discord still gets unfair treatment from everypony once he's set free, Sunrise Blossom acts no different from the rest of them despite the various disclaimers that claim she's "pretending", nothing else funny or different happens like I was promised, Timon and Pumbaa are completely absent throughout the rest of the whole thing, and to add insult to injury, this was actually written WAY before our other AUs where Dr. Hooves and Derpy know about Discord and how Sunrise, Timon and Pumbaa befriended him, so that means they're behaviour towards Discord is just as bad as everyone else's! How bad exactly? Bad enough to have the Doc actually AGREE with Rainbow Dash when she mentions something about a backup plan! That's how bad it was! Now, Dede42 did eventually try to fix some of the problems starting from Chapter 6 and onwards, but did that REALLY make up for all the disappointment in those previous chapters? Not even a little bit. So, here's a version of this story that'll hopefully fix all those problems and try to be as funnier and more tolerable as possible. Please remember that like all our other projects, this is just written for fun and is not meant to be taken too seriously. Remember to keep all reviews positive as again, constructive criticism sadly isn't for everyone. And remember, if you don't like what we write, that's perfectly fine, but don't waste your time getting angry about it in the review page. Seriously, I can't stress that last rule enough no matter how many times it was said before in the past. Again, we don't own anything from My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic or The Lion King's Timon and Pumbaa. Read, review (again, nice reviews only if you please) and enjoy!

Keep Calm and Flutter On (AU): Chapter 1: Prologue/It's Time!

(Like I said, there will be a few moments where I'll be needing your help with a few things, online sister. And it looks like I could do with some help with this first part right now. What's supposed to happen here? Nothing too different from the original version. Except this time, the two clients who are expecting some potions from Sunrise are Dr. Hooves and Derpy Hooves who wait patiently as they can while Sunrise is in the back room. The part where she senses a magical buildup from upstairs and discovers a letter from Snowflake goes on as normal, but before she sets off to the jungle, she hurries downstairs to tell Dr. Hooves and Derpy the news. I'm unsure whether or not she already told them what she's sneakily been sending to Celestia all this time, so I don't know what reaction to expect from them. Anyway, she sends them both off to gather up Twilight and her friends and tell them to meet up at the outskirts of Ponyville and wait for Celestia there. After that, the rest of the prologue goes on as normal and Sunrise gathers up Discord. Only this time, before the chapter ends, Timon is a little unsure if this idea of Sunrise's is actually going to work and whether or not the ponies will be truly willing to accept Discord right away. So, he convinces Pumbaa that they should sneakily follow them in case anything goes wrong and Sunrise needs their help, they go gather up their pendants and they're off!)

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So, uh...here's hoping you can handle all of this, online sister. I'd do all this myself if my writing style for this particular episode was as good as yours. Best of luck. And don't worry, take all the time you need. I don't plan on rushing this project. Bye for now!
12/20/2020 c328 RolePlayer48
Thanks for understanding, online sister! Though, if we're gonna do this, let's do it together! Until then, see you soon! Hugs for days!

Oh yes. Kaa?

Kaa: Yes?

Me: Could you maybe have a few words with Spitfire again? Apparently, she hasn't learned from the last time.

Kaa: With pleasure!

Spitfire: Oh no! Not again! (Flies away) MOMMY!

Kaa: Darn.
12/20/2020 c327 RolePlayer48
Okay, long story short, I'm not sure whether or not I like "Twelve Days of Christmas for Donald Duck" that much.

Donald Duck: (outraged) WHAT?! (Jumps into the air, angrily flailing his arms around, sputtering out nothing but gibberish) WHAT'S THE BIG IDEA HERE?! HOW COULD YOU NOT LIKE IT?! WHAT COULD POSSIBLY BE WRONG WITH A STORY ALL ABOUT ME, HUH?! WHAT GIVES, YOU BIG PALOOKA?! (Angrily breathes in and out through his nostrils) Huh?

Sheriff of Nottingham: (walks past carrying a sack of gold coins that were CLEARLY stolen from some Christmas charity event, singing happily to himself) Oh, he throws an angry tantrum if he cannot have his way! He...(notices Donald) oh, hi, Donald! You know, when you think about it, it almost sounds like I was just describing you just then and there! (Laughs) Oh, you and PJ! Alike in every way! (Continues on his way) Oh, he throws an angry tantrum if he cannot have his way!

Donald Duck: (offended) HEY! You take that back! (Angrily follows Sheriff) I DON'T throw tantrums! I NEVER get mad! Everybody LOVES me! Get BACK here and give back that money AT ONCE! (Makes another unintelligible duck noise in anger)

Sunrise Blossom: (arrives on the scene) Um, what's all the commotion, RolePlayer48? Is anything the matter?

Me: (sighs) Apparently, Donald Duck doesn't take kindly to me saying I'm not much of a fan of Dede42's latest Christmas story. Don't get me wrong, I think it's an okay story, but I can safely say that after the recent chapters that have been posted two days ago, I am starting to lose interest in it just a little bit. That and I'm starting to sense a recurring theme here. Donald does his usual stuff, a knock at the door interrupts him, he goes to open it and finds a gift left for him by his "Secret Santa" and then...well, that's it. Then, the chapter just ends there. Not exactly the type of story one can properly enjoy if it's just the same thing happening in each chapter if you see where I'm coming from here. No offence intended, online sister.

Sunrise Blossom: (nods) Hmm. It does seem to be dragging a little, doesn't it?

Spitfire: Hey! It's EXACTLY what you wanted from Dede42 though, RIGHT?!

Sunrise Blossom: Huh?

Me: (already seeing where this is going) Oh boy. Here we go.

Spitfire: You specifically asked if she had anything special planned for Christmas to cheer everybody up like she normally would around this time of year! Something that wouldn't be as stressful as any of your other projects! You asked for something special and you GOT something special! You don't like it? Well, TOUGH! Next time, be careful what you wish for! (Scoffs) I swear, you're almost as bad as that hypocritical Wonderbolt recruit of mine!

Me: Okay, look, let's rephrase a few things I said that day. Yes, I did indeed ask if my online sister had anything planned to cheer me up after all I've been through this year. BUT, I also asked if it was anything that the both of us could work on TOGETHER if you can remember what I said that day so well, Captain Clueless.

Spitfire: (offended) HEY!

Sunrise Blossom: Why? Did you want a part in this Christmas project?

Me: No, Sunrise. That's not what I...(sighs)...look, I was actually expecting my online sister to ask me if I had any ideas on what we could do for the holidays this year to cheer the both of us up a little. Because if I'm being honest here, I actually still do have an idea that's been forming in my head for quite a while now. I wanted to tell her what it was, but I wanted her to ask me first.

Spitfire: Why? Did you want to be 100% sure that this new idea of yours wouldn't get REJECTED like all of your OTHER ideas you've been sending her over the past few months were?

Me: (losing patience) They WEREN'T rejected, Spitfire! They...(sighs again)...look, "Twelve Days of Christmas for Donald Duck" is okay and I'll admit that I was starting to enjoy it, but again, after reading through the recent two chapters, I started to lose interest due to how short and rushed they were. And again, like I said, it's most likely going to keep repeating the same cycle Donald goes through over and over again until the eventual twelfth chapter. Not exactly something one would normally be hyped for if you get what I'm saying here. Again, no offence intended, online sister.

Sunrise Blossom: Well, what did you have in mind instead?

Me: I wanted to remake "Keep Calm and Flutter On", okay?! It's all I've been thinking about almost all month seeing as how it was made during the holidays last year. I wanted to fix all the problems I had with certain chapters. I wanted to tone down the treatment Discord gets from everypony in this episode. Including you, Sunrise. But most of all, I just...(sighs again) I just want to help Dede42 get through this writer's block as best as I can. I don't want it to go on any longer than it has done already. The year is almost over. I can't go through another whole year of nothing from my online sister. It'll drive me more crazy than everything 2020 has put us through.

Spitfire: Wow. You are THAT desperate, aren't you?

Me: I can't help it, Spitfire! It's the only good idea I have left!

Spitfire: And how can you be sure this idea won't backfire on you like all of your OTHER ones have?

Me: Well, the least we can do is TRY! Together!

Spitfire: Pfft! That's if you can get Dede42 to agree on it! And I highly doubt she will after hearing how you feel about her still in-progress Christmas story!

Me: Hey! I was being positive about it!

Spitfire: Yeah, you keep telling yourself that!

Me: But...(sighs again)...why can I never win any argument with you, Spitfire? Just why? (Clears throat) So...yeah. That was...pretty much my idea for something we could do together for Christmas, online sister. Listen, I know it's not really a good idea and it has nothing to do with Christmas, but again, it's the last good idea I have left. And once more, I have nothing against "Twelve Days of Christmas for Donald Duck". It's an okay story, but it just wasn't what I had in mind when I asked what we would be doing for Christmas this year. No hard feelings though, right? Hugs?
12/18/2020 c327 RolePlayer48
Thanks!
12/17/2020 c326 RolePlayer48
Thanks, online sister!
12/17/2020 c325 RolePlayer48
Darn it. And just when I was starting to get into it too.
12/16/2020 c324 RolePlayer48
Good to know! Thanks for the hugs! See you soon!
12/14/2020 c323 RolePlayer48
Thanks!
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