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12/25/2020 c6 Guest
Focus on the sons journey more please
12/24/2020 c6 pyrojack25
This is actually kinda cool. Nice to see something a little different, kinda like with a certain cowpoke I know... Come to think of it, your characters avatar reminds of an Old Republic character in a trailer, armored coat and all.

Kinda curious how he's aware of The Loop? As I recall only the Lyoko Warriors know about, long before Alex ran into The Factory.

This guy not only get a good old fashioned makeover, but get caught with some sloppy seconds with girls, kinda. I keep hearing Will Smith screaming "Momma No!" about that last kiss. :P

I know, half of it's ridiculous! KFC trying to make their own console? Like what?! That's just so stupid! Any way nice meeting you, Happy Holidays, have a nice night.
12/17/2020 c6 Guest
Update sons journey please
12/4/2020 c6 2Josh Xana
Very cool. I just read the whole story so far and I am enjoying it.
4/1/2020 c5 Rainsfere
Not too much to say here as this chapter more or less followed what we saw in the show, but that's fine for now since Alex is still becoming a part of the group. Though I would encourage you to create an "episode' of your own if there is a episode in the series you can't or don't want to work with. Besides, XANA can do an awful lot so you have plenty of options to create a scenario of your own making.

Anyway, having Alex save Yumi was a good move. It wins her trust and cements him as a full fledged Lyoko Warrior at the same time. If anyone had doubts about him before, they don't now. Alex also didn't seem afraid despite his impending demise. Either he doesn't scare easily or he was at peace knowing he made friends. Likely the latter.

The action was pretty good. It was Alex's second go in Lyoko but he held his own just fine and he's getting better with his pistol. I'll be interested to see just how good he will become in the future especially as he and the others continue to gel as a team. With Alex as a new element there will be more they can do, whether in pairs or as a complete squad.

I don't mind Alex's outlook on life changing. That was going to happen regardless. So long as it isn't drastic or too quick I'm fine with it. A near death experience can rattle you in ways a person who hasn't been through it cannot understand. It's good to see him realize that it was time for a change. Living a loner/lonely life all but guarantees that no one will remember you for long. No one to miss you and no one to cry for you except for family, and that's if you're lucky to have even that. He understands how fragile life is now.

It'll be interesting to see how he changes and what mistakes he'll make along the way. A change in lifestyle is not always smooth after all. So keep it up and I'll be sure to check in a couple of months to see if this has updated.
3/27/2020 c5 40Light Seeker 001
I like this so far.
3/25/2020 c5 NightShock99
Well Alex and Aelita have certainly become more forward in this chapter. Aelita wanting to kiss Jeremy already and Alex kissing Sissi out of nowhere. No clue where you got those ideas from or why you put them in, but I'm sure it will make sure eventually. P.S. the ending was hilarious.
3/24/2020 c5 5Auguste the Clown
This was a good chapter, it show how everyone is starting to trust Alex and how he's coming out of his shell. At first with Alex new look and him kissing Sissy, I was worried he was having a bad reaction to his near death experience; because I know that when someone has a near death experience they'll react negatively and do some crazy stuff or decided to reinvent themselves in someway or something
3/24/2020 c5 2admiral809
Well, this seems like it'll be fun to read. But I warn you, if you're going to link Alex in ANY way to Aelita's past, I OVERWHELMINGLY RECOMMEND watching the ENTIRE show; slight spoiler, there are situations caused by it (particularly s4ep25) that will be improbable to tweak on the fly.
8/5/2019 c4 15Draconos13
Gosh, I'm late for the review! Life gets in the way...

In any case, this was a nice read. I understand the conflict Alex will have with the group considering how he introduced himself to them. Trust is a hard thing to earn, especially when you have secrets to protect. It looks like Alex is slowly gaining trust amongst his friends and fellow fighters. I think finishing that challenge will take several chapters/missions, especially if awkward situations pop up.

Let's see how Alex fares in the next chapter. Secondary question: Are you going to follow the episodes perfectly in order, or change them as you see fit? I think you can have some creative freedom with the order of things in Season 1, at least.
6/15/2019 c4 Darth Monkey
Got to say I'm liking this story so far
Alex is an interesting character and with the help of the Lyoko warriors he's slowly coming out of his shell
I wonder what he'll end up doing during the next episode Big Bug, I also can't help but think how he'll react to Kiwi

Also I got to agree with Rainsfere about Alex being able to remember things after the return to the past before he went to Lyoko, looking forward to an explanation behind that
One more thing, I like those list for possible abilities and vehicles for Alex, I can't help but wonder what will become true

However I have a few things to add to those lists
Ability's
1. magnet or gecko feet, his boots stick to surfaces like spiderman
2. a super jump like Mario
3. a freeze ray like the bloks

Vehicles
1. a mini helicopter, the over copter
2. during the season 4 outfit upgrades maybe Alex could get wheels hidden in his boots or a grappling hook (an attachment for his guns or hidden in a belt)
6/15/2019 c1 Matt
So is Alex a boy or a girl? I mean Alex can be both a boys name and a girls name so I'm kind of confused.
6/11/2019 c4 Rainsfere
Forced himself into the group? I have to disagree with that assessment. I would call it lucking into the group. Alex never made demands of the Lyoko Warriors. He never stood in their way, never demanded answers and based on the information we got from the previous chapters, tried to stay away from them. Even if the Lyoko Warriors told him to never come back to the factory I highly doubt Aelita would accept that. Alex hopped into Lyoko and helped save her life when no one else was available and would argue in his defense. And if that isn't enough she would likely seek him out once she escapes Lyoko so she can thank him in person. The moment he hopped into Lyoko he sealed his fate, there was no turning back.

I get that they were upset with him for sneaking around but even if he walked up to them and asked them what was going on the result would've likely been the same or they would've denied it altogether to protect their secret. Plus, Alex was literally running for his life for the gas in chapter 3 and used his memory to survive. You can't fault someone for wanting to live. I think that's something Yumi really needs to take into account.

Anyway that all aside I did like this chapter. Alex is slowly stepping out of his comfort zone whether he knows or it. So far his mantra is to stay out of the way and out of the spotlight, but hanging out with the Lyoko Warriors will flip that upside down. I suspect other students will take notes of this if not ask him or the Lyoko Warriros outright why he's been hanging around them so often. He's earning the trust of the group and improving in Lyoko as well which is critical.

One little nitpick that I have is why even bother suggesting doing a test run of the Return to the Past in the first place. Maybe I'm forgetting something in chapter 3 but I thought Alex had made it clear that he did indeed already remember several events. Even Ulrich was beginning to think the same thing. The only question is that no one knows how that is possible. I expect for Jeremy to do some kind of research or experiments on this because so far Alex is the only one who can remember those events without being in Lyoko. That's a big mystery he can sink his teeth into, unfortunately, it may also play on his fears that if Alex can remember it, then can anyone else. Just food for thought.

Again I liked the chapter but I'm going to hold off from following this story for now. Ypou got several other projects in the works and I'm not going to follow a story that will either take a backseat or become abandoned. I'll visit this section every now and then but that's all i'll do for now. Keep up the good work.
6/10/2019 c4 1pokemonking0924
Looks like Alex is earning the trust of his new friends pretty well, especially after this latest XANA attack
Although Yumi is a tough nut to crack especially since it took quite a number of episodes before she decided to trust William with Lyoko's secret
Can't wait to see what Alex will contribute to the group in the future
Alex didn't get to do much this chapter but at least he slowly bonding with his new friends

Thanks for the mention and glad to hear that that list of possible ability's for Alex might be true, can't wait to see what ability he has that is similar to one on my list
Also I wonder what vehicle he's going to be using during season 2
I have a few ideas for that...
1. an ATV, with wheels similar to Mario Kart 8
2. a snow mobile themed ride
3. a mecha beast from slugterra
4. dune buggy
6/10/2019 c4 3MerlockVonBaron
Hey I was wondering when you would update
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