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7/31 c76 SWchuckFan
YEP! Your Rizzo is pretty cool! Excited to see her with chuck and sarah. Chucks breakdown of Amy was fire! Loved the chapter thx for sharing!
7/29 c76 Guest
I've never liked Zondra as much as I like her already in your story. She made me laugh out loud. And I'm surprised by how much I love the three of them working together already. I was afraid this might be a low point and I don't mean that in a bad way, just a part of the story now that everything with the ship happened and Charah having sex and dating now, the part of the story that would slow down. But I don't think it will slow down. I like this back and forth with them three. Thanks!
7/28 c76 Naru285
amazing stuff as always! live the banter between chuck and Sarah. I read that part of going over the rules and nearly died Laughing it was freaking adorabke
7/28 c76 12halfachance
i loved this chapter SO much y'all. ugh. i feel like it's just such a good indication of like, the change that's happened across this story. beckman's talk with chuck, the subtle (ish) way she hints her distrust of shaw, actually checking and talking with chuck about sarah and zondra. it's been happening a while here but i think, like, post-chuck and sarah too i had a sudden wow they've all come so far kinda moment. but lol the line "she looks at that woman in a way she didn't even look at me when ii was like oh shit it IS bad, lmao. good on chuck for somehow not giving the game away and actually making beckman think they're even still struggling omg. give the man an oscar. and ugh, it's so good that even this much later chuck is STILL like, sarah and i are together. still processing that. and YES that he gets stuck thinking about her actively writing down the button up thing sksks, but i love his thought about like, as he was noticing things about her, she was also noticing things about him. so soft. there's just such you two brilliance in both the "she has no idea" moment immediately followed by Hot Love. it's such perfect Chuckness lmao. also thank you for saying that about the Gentle Hand, i have. always questioned that name bahahah. i gotta say as much as sarah having that brief blip of doubting if chuck really flashed stings a bit for them both i'm sure, the way she suddenly realizes exactly what her believing it was zondra did, and apologizes to her right away, i love that. again, growth. but lmao when chuck flashes on amy and she cups his face, the scramble for HIS PUPILS. YES HE HAS NORMAL EYES AHEM NECESSARY TOUCHING god the dork. and then mmmm when he gets all I Vetted Her, and she's all like continue Agent Carmichael, just oh my god they cannot go a moment without flirting. and now they're at this wonderful stage where she just ADMITS she found it really hot. blessed, truly blessed. take it to the baaaank, mm mm mmmmm. and you don't let up bc immediately after, chuck says the driving thing! absolute horndogs i can't! but YES sarah walker drove a TANK. she hotwired and drove a tank. i adore her, and i'm making that canon now. annnnd chuck is also very into it, bc of course he is. and what a closing line sksks zondra is just setting these up everywhere, i love it, and there will inevitably be more and i can't waaaait!
7/27 c76 Guest
This story is so underappreciated. You pay tribute to the show and all the work the cast and crew and writers put into it, but also change and sometimes improve what the creators were able to do on network tv. I'm sure it has been work for you guys but I appreciate this story a lot and your work. It's such a good story and I love where it is right now especially. Zondra has never been on my radar because she wasn't in the show for more than an episode or 2 but I love her here. So thank you! Please keep it going and keep posting!
7/26 c76 TianC
Thank you both so much for this chapter! I was missing this story, and a great chapter too! now Sarah's "I appreciated the tank" has a hole new meaning lol, I can't wait to see how these 3 workout on mission now that they solved the traitor issue!
7/26 c76 tiggerhk
Great chapter leading the team into the mission. Having Zondra into this arc is going to be entertaining. This is a great writing partnership.
7/25 c76 chucksboxers
Vet everyone! So many good lines in this chapter! The bit where Sarah riles Chuck and then grins into the pillow! Hot wiring a tank!
Beckman is really good here too!
Really good chapter- I can’t wait for the invasion plan!
7/25 c76 Katie Langville
Great chapter! I am SO happy they're together and love seeing how they're trying to keep it under wraps
7/25 c76 bfarrington56
Great chapter. I love the interactions between Chuck and Beckman and Chuck, Sarah and Zondra.
7/25 c76 10jwatkins
So excited to see this. You two never fail to deliver. Chuck pulled that off nicely, helping to patch things between Sarah and Zondra, earning some respect from Zondra as well. I love it's Sarah that's always the one that seems to have issues with the rules. I had to snort at the closing comments. If Zondra only knew...
7/25 c76 AwesomeCasey
This is one of my favorite stories in Chuck FanFiction and this chapter just added to the enjoyment. The banter between Chuck and Sarah is, as always, sparkling and so darn funny and heartwarming. Sarah's list has now become "an actual book"...I can't help but laugh when I read that!

I loved the creative way that Chuck was able to solve the Gaez traitor situation and communicate it to Agent Rizzo without compromising his situation. But Chuck & Sarah need to watch out...it looks like Zondra is extremely sneaky and it seems inevitable that she will catch on to their relationship. That would be fine, since she knows how to keep a secret and is now back to being a close friend of Sarah's.

I thought that Charah happening some 70 chapters into this fiction would really present some problems for the authors to keep this story fresh as it winds its way canon-ishly through the paths of "Chuck". But this chapter shows how their relationship will in no way slow the fun and endearing qualities of this tale. And "sh*tb*tch" is such an awesome word! This is such a great story, and I can't wait for it to continue.
7/7 c51 JHershey
Make him an agent. Now that I’ve read this, I’m really left wondering why someone didn’t think of this solution earlier on the show. Glad to see it here. Very fun. Looking forward to seeing where it goes.
7/6 c47 JHershey
Had a chance to read quite a few chapters on this. The Lon Kirk rewrite was an amazing improvement from the show. I really enjoyed what you guys did there.
Chuck under the bed with Casey and Ilsa had me laughing so hard I had tears in my eyes. Good stuff!
6/19 c75 Tpsoftballdad
Absolutely love how Sarah is struggling with her rules more than Chuck. Kissing in the equipment room with a camera, long hug and falling into Casey innuendo thoughts were all very funny. Plus for all her worry about Chuck he’s done good so far. So good that Chuck wanted to punch Shaw for the seduction assignment for Sarah but even better that he came up with a better plan gaining Beckman’s respect and showing up Shaw. But my favorite moment of all was the Piranha discussion. Yes for all the sweetness of sharing it and following no secrets, no lies but how Sarah opened up afterwards discussing placing Chuck on a pedestal and all the emotionally turmoil she was experiencing around all that. And Chuck promises her she will always have him... so sweet! However it seems at times Sarah forgets Chuck is the Intersect and should have provided some more background regarding her dispute with Zondra. One word from Zondra and Chuck flashes and apparently comes to a conclusion regarding the true double agent. Can’t wait to see how that plays out on the plane and if Sarah continues to *happily* struggle with all these rules. I know being scared forced Sarah to over analyze, over plan and set rules but seeing her be so happy now that she is together with Chuck is such a joy. Thanks so much SC and DC for the update. Sorry it took me so long to get to read and review, but definitely can’t wait for more.
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