12/21/2020 c2 230Me
I PMd more but I just wanted to note something I forgot, that you need to skip a line between each paragraph, otherwise it's hard to read. However, you do seem to write well.
I PMd more but I just wanted to note something I forgot, that you need to skip a line between each paragraph, otherwise it's hard to read. However, you do seem to write well.
12/16/2018 c1 22llamaBoyPH
There's such a thing as Fictionpress for non-fanfic stories, you know. I couldn't see anything that's related to LOA in this fic, like at all.
There's such a thing as Fictionpress for non-fanfic stories, you know. I couldn't see anything that's related to LOA in this fic, like at all.
10/19/2018 c1 1EmilieSukamto
I'll try to post the next chapter asap and try to make the chapters longer
I'll try to post the next chapter asap and try to make the chapters longer
10/18/2018 c1 fhwibxiw
I can't wait for the next chapter, although I hope you'll post longer chapters as the story progresses.
I can't wait for the next chapter, although I hope you'll post longer chapters as the story progresses.