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5/17 c9 snapecastle96
Please continue the story.
5/17 c5 snapecastle96
I like your story so far but each chapter repeats itself multiple times and in this one there was a bunch of gibberish interlaced in the chapter and it was almost unreadable. Please fix it.
8/18/2020 c2 Guest
I really wanted to like this :(. Christine is not stupid enough to forgive Erik so easily. HE MURDERED A MAN! Also, she was in love with Raoul in all versions of the original - why can't people see that?
8/31/2019 c1 Laura Page
This is such a wonderful story, Thank you for writing this
8/31/2019 c8 6La Belle Dame avec Merci
Great flashback to the past- and yes, I agree that Erik and Christine’s father would have been friends! I also liked Erik’s charming shyness, and the way Raoul is coming across as a whiny little nuisance- which is what he is!
7/15/2019 c7 La Belle Dame avec Merci
Good job in describing Erik’s sensory overload, as he would naturally feel after all that time in the lair and the familiarity of the opera house. I’m sure he doesn’t go in restaurants all that often! And it’s nice to see him getting out and having fun. You ended on a cliffy- let’s hope that Raoul doesn’t spoil everything!
7/15/2019 c6 La Belle Dame avec Merci
The romance is very well-drawn. It's nice how you portrayed Erik’s shyness, and Christine's feelings of inadequacy, and the tender and hesitant communication between the two as they come to an understanding. Also good that you're acknowledging that Erik and Christine have known each other for years, after all. Congratulations!
2/17/2019 c5 Cameron Shfer
Great chapter as all the others! I'm so excited for the next one and the hopefully many to come, I really do hope Erik opens up for Christine though :) but still, this was great!
2/1/2019 c5 La Belle Dame avec Merci
Good to see how you’re really giving details of their personal lives and rounding out the characters. And carefully developing the relationship between Erik and Christine!
However, a side note- they wouldn’t have been baking brownies. Brownies were developed in America in the 1890s. They certainly wouldn’t have been baked in France at the time of POTO.
That’s the thing that needs to be done with historical fiction- researching what they would have been eating, wearing etc. in that time period. Maybe you could show them baking madeleines, croissants or eclairs, or something else that’s suitably French?
1/31/2019 c5 Erik's Angel of Music 24601
Another great chapter! Excited to see how this double plays out!
12/10/2018 c4 Erik's Angel of Music 24601
Another great chapter!
11/26/2018 c3 Erik's Angel of Music 24601
I hope the next chapter is ready soon!
10/20/2018 c2 2LoneShadow17
More soon!

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