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8/9/2020 c5 1PrincessMagic
Wow this is Fantastic and angsty!
3/5/2020 c5 pphantast
Would absolutely love to see you continue this story. :-)
11/16/2019 c5 guategal
Thought you had Grace character's treatise most well depicted. Having Zach rush home was just a tad confusing for me however. Where was he that he would he likely respond so rapidly at his sister's request? Your elaborations
with Will character's inner voice seem quite well conceived and indeed quite well plotted. Alicia was so in character confronting Peter but a tad out of character for in waiting so long before reaching out to communicate updated news to Grace and Zach.
All in all your high interest flow flow and development surely overrides these 2 tiny character variations for me. Am most delighted you updated this fine story and hope you can find yourself prioritizing its focus in the future. Thank you so for sharing and extending your efforts. Your talent is appreciated.
11/13/2019 c5 21Esquinzo
This chapter was so worth the wait! I'm was a little afraid you had abandoned the story, so I was really happy when I saw the update!
I cannot wait for Zach and Grace to meet Will! (I guess they will when they go to the hospital?!).
9/10/2019 c4 pphantast
Just reread the latest chapter of this story. It's wonderful and I really hope you will continue writing!
7/5/2019 c4 Guest
Just reread the four chapters! Update soon please!
6/28/2019 c4 16Vigilante24
godess this story is pure gold! I love it! they are so cute together! cannot wait for the next one!
6/24/2019 c4 guategal
This plot movement is most interesting. I surely will love to read more of Will in his dad role. Your Rachael and Alicia scene in bed was endearing indeed. You have well set forth Alicia's attitudinal issues regarding Peter's treatment of Rachael. Anxiously await your future developments between A & W as well as Rachael's recovery and role between their interplay. I so am enjoying this story as you have such different plotting relationships growing. Nicely done indeed!
6/23/2019 c4 21Esquinzo
Hi,
Thanks for updating so quickly, I know how stressful that can be so I really appreciate you putting so much work into this!
I really love reading your story and I'm super glad Rachel woke up again. I can't wait to see where her last ominous words will take her and Will, but I'm excited to find out!
6/22/2019 c3 guategal
How well you 've kept Will IC. Your angst elevation dialogues ring so likely and Will's heart aches continue with yet more dimension. Love your chapters' having worded titles and how you used flashback to clarify A/W's historical split-up. You've got it going on indeed with your plotting twist integrations! Can't wait for your next update!
6/21/2019 c3 Esquinzo
So heartbreaking, especially the break-up scene. I can see Will regretting that one.
Still, I'm glad Alicia finally told him he's Rachel's father, even if he suspected all along. I'm looking forward to seeing their relationship develop and Will and Alicia getting closer again!
6/19/2019 c2 Guest
So good! Update soon!
6/19/2019 c2 pphantast
Loving this story so far! Very curious to see how Will's going to take the news and what the revelation he has a daughter will mean for his relationship with Alicia. Can't wait to read more!
6/18/2019 c2 guategal
Love your plotted twists! Your articulation is quite clear and flowing. Your Rachael is already a winner, and hopefully a stimulation for A & W to reconnect. Wow! All this and we're only at chapter 2! Congratulations and please do keep those updates flying!
6/18/2019 c2 Esquinzo
Thank you so much for updating (especially such long installments)! Alicia and Will are super cute together and I just love how they're observed by Rachel without noticing it. I can't wait for the next update, the ending would be prefect for Rachel to deliriously tell him that she's his daughter ;D
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