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6/27/2019 c1 Selenite-Flowers
Really beautiful and poetic language is used and it reads like a poem without a rhyming scheme, it has lulling and elegant style that shows you are very skilled. Well done, I love your use of motif with the visual language of Thom becoming more and more torn. I'm always amazed by the interesting and tragic takes that are executed so well when people write about Thom and this is no exception. he is really interesting to read about because he is so fundamentally flawed and nuanced that his perspective is a unique experience to read. The only thing I could really think of that could improve on this is just writing a little bit more to held fully develop this concept that is extremely engaging and intriguing. really great work, keep it up!

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