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6/24/2019 c1 2Vladiel
Sorry to hear you were pulled out. The dialogue's based on the concept the characters are in true love with each other, they're again lovers (as they were back in the Middle Ages), not enemies anymore. Will you tell me what lines do you find OOC? Thanx much 4 the review! Though it's pretty discouraging:P for i deemed they were in character:)
6/24/2019 c1 Scarlet Empress
So the smut was fabulous, and I'm borderline *OFFENDED* that you left it off there without continuing ;) ...but I have to admit that the OOC-ness of some lines of dialogue pulled me out of it a few times :P Still enjoyed it, though! Glad you posted this!

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