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7/17/2020 c14 sittingonaplanet
I am loving this, and it's cool.
7/14/2020 c14 Arika Koski
If this was a film would it be rated R?
7/13/2020 c14 14ll Kairi ll
Omg no way... treasure planets is one of my favorites! #fangirlscreams
4/22/2020 c13 3CeleneTheAngel
How far you've gone...immediatley though of Moana. "How far I'll go," and whatnot...wait...the implications... Ah nevernind. I'll wait for answers.
HOPEFULLY they won't be taking as long as sa CERTAIN MOBILE GAME*COUGH*COUGH*
That is all.

Of course there's the whole "who's 'HE'" thing. The M.O.M? Luxu? Riku?
Jk jk...that last one was a joke, props if you get where it's from though.

I'll bide my time. And as for you my fine lady, I can't attend to you now as I'd like, but try to stay out of my way, just try.
I'll get you my pretty and your little dog too!

Practice social distancing, and wear latex gloves wherever you go.
Keep up the good work and stay safe!
4/6/2020 c11 ChunkyFunkyMunky
I am glad you updated. Congrats getting a promotion during this time.

I am uncomfortable with the idea of Riku and Kairi teaching Sora: the guy who probably has more experience with the Keyblade than them combined. I mean, he literally carried everyone in their fights against the Real Organization XIII. I am sure he is able to distinguish between magic and not magic, and I do not understand how Kairi knows more about magic than either of them. Riku, while a Keyblade Master, does not have formal training is now trying to teach Sora said training; it is difficult to kick old habits. Not sure if formal training is really necessary if Riku can be considered a Keyblade Master.

I have, however, grown content with the idea of Sora not being a Keyblade Master and instead being a freelance wielder, especially since he constantly loses his skills/powers.
4/6/2020 c11 CeleneTheAngel
Trouble in Paradise, eh? I wasn't expecting them to have too many problems to work through, though it kind of makes sense. There's just one thing I'm confused about that hasn't really been answered.

When the summary says Sora will degrade slowly, does it mean physically, or mentally? I assumed mentally but it's not too obvious yet. Or maybe it is and I'm just a dummy~ heh. Guess we'll see eventually...
12/29/2019 c1 Minty220
Umm, no disrespect, you worked hard on this and stuff, I can see that, but just off the first chapter I can see numerous canonical technicalities that are wrong in your story. Just putting it out there. Its not bad, just some of the stuff needs to be fact checked.
11/12/2019 c11 14ll Kairi ll
Oh please update soon! I really want to see where this story goes and the whole dating triangle, YES PLEASE!
I hope you feel better soon!

Kairi
10/6/2019 c11 8IanAlphaAxel
Welcome back, great chapter! Can't wait to read more!
10/6/2019 c11 3CeleneTheAngel
Shame this doesn't have more reviews.
Anyways, this was, uh...

Well, it was cuuuuuuuuuuute!~

Take as much time as ya need! Your loyal fans will be here for you when you return!

NOW GIVE THIS AUTHOR REVIEWS, PEOPLE! This story's better than a lot of the ones out there, AND I'VE SEEN MORE REVIEWS ON LESSER WORK! YOU KNOW WHAT TO DO!
6/20/2019 c4 ChunkyFunkyMunky
Donald was an octopus, but whatever.

Lol I was going to suggest Kairi be a deer as the prey of the group or a bear like her hood instead, but yeah, she definitely needed compensation from KH3. Curiously, is she currently larger than Riku?

I am really honored to be mentioned like that. Thank you.
6/14/2019 c1 ChunkyFunkyMunky
Curious, I would have thought Sora would be a lion again like in Pridelands or a tiger (sort of) like in Monstropolis.

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