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7/7 c35 1Styx83
Finally finished this Chapter as well. Well, Carbine. No words for her. Still i'm wondering if she's really done with Throttle.. And Charley.
Stoker - ah. Hope he'll survive. The poor guy. There are so few mice left. They need everyone.

I am looking for a conversation between Throttle and Charley.. Or maybe one of them and stoker again.
What about Modo?

Yeah, Vinnie and pip. We'll see. As long as He won't get a heart attack because of the dog.
6/5 c35 MargariteRey
Good night. Shocked! This story just keeps getting better!
The big question will be Vinnie will be honest with Pip? I am intrigued! What are you doing Vinnie?
Carabine hurt me. :(
Nice job :)
5/23 c35 13Youkai55
Nicely done even if you only consider this a Filler.
There is still a lot of good in here:
The Brotherly banter between Stoker and Vinnie, shows they do care for the other, more deeply than the show let on.
Pip’s and Vinnie’s relationship, seems to be broadening.
Throttle telling Carbine, they are done.
The only thing I didn’t care for was Stoker telling Modo, Niva was gone. The poor guy. Maybe Liv could be the one to mend his heart?
Vinnie being afraid of a dog? Priceless!
As I said, lots of good in here. Dom’t doubt yourself.
5/23 c35 3SpaceFlora
Loved the chapter, it had it all, great dialogue, it got me laughing but also sad...A real roller-coaster...
Well, first of all, I loved Vinnie and Modo in this chapter, the way they behave towards each other, and in general, is greatly depicted here. Not much Throttle in this one but I'm sensing we'll get to read more of him soon enough...
I also like that friendship between Vinnie and Charley, he can be a little more vulnerable with her...
And Pip telling Vinnie "..you have a very unhealthy way of dealing with your inferiority complex" got me laughing out loud!
All in all, you did great job, I love your way of writing!
Keep up the awsome job!
5/21 c35 wolftattoo
Will Vinnie tell Pip he banged Charley knowing his leader, bro & best friend had feelings for her? If he does Pip will no doubt lay him out for it & think Vinnie is just using her. Vinnie really needs to remove the necklace & let Harley go so he can have some happiness in his life. I hope the mice aren't the last there's got to be a handful of other survivors as for Carbine, Throttle & Charley boy things are really going to heat up. And Throttle & Charley haven't even their conversation yet especially when he tells Charley he knows she banged Vinnie. IMO Charley should feel regret for sleeping with Vinnie she no sooner was she rid of the guy who abused her she goes jumping on another guys dick. Everyone accept Modo & Pip better get their shit together.
4/26 c34 MargariteRey
Woooow! This chapter has everything!
I do not know where to start: Throttle...man he surprised me. Vinnie being Vinnie. I love him! And my dear Modo...is the best! :)
Thanks! Nice job! Have a nice day!;
4/25 c34 1Styx83
Nice chapter. Much Action in it ;)
I like Vinnie disobeying Throttles Orders. I like Modo who catched Vinnie just in time to avoid a fist fight.
Uff. This relationship drama in front of all the others. Carbine really lost her senses.
They all came to save stoker here. Her hopefully beloved uncle. But it's more important for her to claim what she thought was hers. Tss.
4/25 c34 Guest
Excelente !
4/24 c34 3SpaceFlora
Well, that was a long chapter there just like promised but hey, I'm not complaining!
Ooh...where to begin... well, the dialogue was great and really fun at times, I mean Vinnie is so hilarious and even more so since he doesn't know that himself. And his and Carbine's little scene was very entertaining.
But oh man, Throttle really had it with Carbine... I was really surprised by his behaviour... maybe even a little sorry for Carbine even if it wasn't right for her to try and use the guilt card...but I guess Throttle had suffered a lot in their relationship. But I do hope things end up well with Carbine also... I've always seen her as someone who is not evil by heart but who has just gotten lost. I think she deserves to be happy too but that might not be possible with Throttle...
And now... Stoker enters the scene :D I'm really curious also if there are more Martians there that didn't die in the war and perhaps got on Earth as well? Or were Carbine and Stoker the only ones?
All in all, I really enjoyed the update! The writing flows and it's a joy to read this story! Keep it up!
4/24 c34 wolftattoo
Stoker finally decides to make his appearance can't wait for Vinnie to tell Pip how he feels about her he really needs to take off Harley's necklace for good so he can move on. But what will happen when Limburger is defeated? Will Charley & Pip stay on earth or go to Mars with Throttle & Vinnie? And Carbine just dug a real deep whole for herself.
4/24 c34 13Youkai55
Something tells me, Carbine isn’t going to take the news too well.
Vinnie and Pip are perfect together. Want to see where their relationship goes.
I have a feeling Liv is not to be messed with. Carbine had better watch her step around her.
Keep going!
2/11 c33 cherryblossm
Love it cant wait for the next chapter hope it is up soon
1/17 c33 3SpaceFlora
Oooh, so good chapter! I loved it! And I admire your ability to write a scene that's that long but still holding the reader's attention the whole long chapter through! Very nice job! And it's great that they had the talk and cleared the air... I'm now very curious to read about Charley's and Throttle's next talk... how will it ago. Not to mention how will Carbine react to all this... Keep up the excellent work!
1/16 c33 MargariteRey
Goodnight everyone.
Okay. I think we've reached one of the key points in this story: "Vinnie -Charley- Throttle. And the chapter has been like therapeutic for the Biker Mice ... or maybe..for all readers ...
I liked it. :) They have put the cards on the tables and expressed their feelings. I like that Vinnie and Throttle have talked and Modo I love how he behaves.3 I feel that Modo is the balance between the two.

I hope everybody is fine! And Girl, thanks for updating. I hope you are well. Take care of yourself Greetings.
1/15 c33 wolftattoo
Vlaatje, I get what you're saying I guess it's different for me I'm too introverted & a bit cold hearted & I can sense it or look at as person & tell "Ok you're up to no good" I would always be extra cautious but I would never allow myself to rely on someone so bad like Charley had with Max. I allowed a coworker to get real close to me one time & it turned out she was in with my boss because I didn't like nor trusted my boss. So my boss decided to have my coworker do her dirty work for her I was cheated when my boss told me what was going on. But I still wouldn't want Charley despite Vinnie saying "She used me, she reminded me of Harley, I needed comfort" sorry bro you banged the girl I have feelings for I forgive you but forget it. I wonder what Charley & Pip's conversation is going to be like?
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