1/8 c16 Guest
As long as romance isn't the focus, it won't matter. Some scenes are fine but focusing only on the romance part isn't. Btw I hope Itachi and shisui fucks up Hiashi.
As long as romance isn't the focus, it won't matter. Some scenes are fine but focusing only on the romance part isn't. Btw I hope Itachi and shisui fucks up Hiashi.
1/5 c15 ivanacco1
Unfortunately it will alienate a lot of readers, that's how things are, specially if they didn't realize that this story was slash.
Unfortunately it will alienate a lot of readers, that's how things are, specially if they didn't realize that this story was slash.
1/5 c16 ivanacco1
How long till neji pulls an itachi? because that is the most sensible reason to free himself most of the force will be distracted by the uchiha massacre.
How long till neji pulls an itachi? because that is the most sensible reason to free himself most of the force will be distracted by the uchiha massacre.
1/5 c16 Guest
I really have enjoyed this story so far and look forward to you continuing it! I can’t wait to see what happens next and where it’ll go from here as well
I really have enjoyed this story so far and look forward to you continuing it! I can’t wait to see what happens next and where it’ll go from here as well
1/1 c3 Guest
so after only 2 years he already forgot everything , what is the point of making this an si that knows stuff if he instantly forgets everything ? have you read your own story ?
so after only 2 years he already forgot everything , what is the point of making this an si that knows stuff if he instantly forgets everything ? have you read your own story ?
1/1 c2 Guest
cpmgrats for writing a story with no content ... constant contradictions and an mc whos opinion changes every 5 minutes
what is your goal here ? to bore your readers to death with a story that follows canon exactly ? just delete this piece of crap
cpmgrats for writing a story with no content ... constant contradictions and an mc whos opinion changes every 5 minutes
what is your goal here ? to bore your readers to death with a story that follows canon exactly ? just delete this piece of crap
1/1 c16 A wild idiot has appeared
I just found this and like...damn holy shit...it's about to go down next chapter...wow buckle up buttercup cause this sure as hell ain't gonna be pretty neji
I just found this and like...damn holy shit...it's about to go down next chapter...wow buckle up buttercup cause this sure as hell ain't gonna be pretty neji
1/1 c16 CriticalFanatic
Please just post the next chapter! Just write it right now I bleeping need it.
Please just post the next chapter! Just write it right now I bleeping need it.