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12/11/2020 c22 Guest
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9/19/2020 c22 22clank2662
update sooon...
9/17/2020 c22 sacke110
Vergil actually got Robin slightly mad, amazing. And she left too, interesting since they now know who she is. Was also nice to see a bit of her flashback in the devil world.
Nice to see that Nami still shows worry even tho she’s still dissapointed in him.
Miss C huh, and one of those ”devil forged” thingys too.
Nice to see that you’re not planning on having too many OCs.
Robin has a role she needs to play? Important for Vivi in the end? Now I’m curious as heck.
9/16/2020 c22 Guest
Lovely.
9/14/2020 c22 5KP360
Good to see another chapter! I understand Little Garden isn't all that interesting to write about, so I guess introducing another OC for Vergil to keep busy will be something to do. At Least Miss C seems like she has an interesting weapon, it's a far-cry from the usual swords and polearms that people get.

G: And not to mention the Devil Arm is back! It's a good time as any to try it out!

Aside from that, there was a good bit with Robin and her experiences in Thanatos. I didn't think she'd have a connection to the Demon World but I suppose when you're wanted by the World you have to think up more places to hide. That being said, I kind of forgot whether or not Zarja is still alive or not, so there's something I potentially have to pay attention to.

Another thing to note is your plans for your future OCs. I guess it varies between authors, but it seems you're going to rely on them less, which isn't a bad thing. Considering you're already working with a lot of original material, it's good to manage those and not get overwhelmed by all the new additions you're going to put in.

G: Yeah, you would know a lot about that wouldn't you, Mr. Introduce-A-New-OC-Every-Arc?

You're a different case! We're working with elements that are already established in other mediums we have to somehow incorporate that here!

G: Seriously, you've once introduced 7 in one chapter. 7! And we're not even going to see all of them for a considerable period of time!

I regret ever giving you lore.

But yeah, it's not a bad thing at all, and it's fun to see the creative ways you have plans for Vergil to influence canon. Looking forwards to seeing the next chapter!
9/14/2020 c22 Sagicknight
nami and vergil bonding moments are adorable
im enjoying reading the way the character in your story have the anime feel its like vergil was always there even his backstory (the parts you revealed) have that nice one piece feel.
ty for the awesome read :)
9/13/2020 c22 Guest
Awesome chapter.
8/27/2020 c21 Guest
Lovedd it!
8/23/2020 c21 sacke110
Not sure how I feel about her tagging along. It feels really weird, since this part of the story is about Vivi. It could be interesting, but it feels wrong. And I feel really bad for Vivi since she’s one of my favorite chatacters.
8/23/2020 c20 sacke110
Interesting how you handled the introduction of Robin... a hostage huh, interesting.
8/23/2020 c19 sacke110
”I call dibs” hah, nice.
Viviiiii! I love her character so much. I like the short interaction she and Vergil had.
As for Zoro’s fight I think you handled that pretty well.
8/23/2020 c15 sacke110
Hoo.. Nami’s and Vergil’s ”subtle” relationship as Usopp calls it just took another step, nice.
8/23/2020 c14 sacke110
Oof, that’s one way to look at what was happening in Nami’s village... all cowards huh. In a way that makes sense.
8/23/2020 c13 sacke110
Nojiko got shot? Oof good thing Sanji and Usopp was near.
I really like that this arc still hits hard in the feels even though you’ve made big changes to it. This is really good. It’s super interesting reading how all the events are different since Vergil is there. And you’re also amazing at writing the interactions between the characters. Both funny and emotional.
Also, I have no idea what’s going on on Thanatos.
8/23/2020 c12 sacke110
This arc always gives me the feels
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