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1/3 c22 Whitewolf1224
I’m glad to see your still posting new chapters on this story!. We’re seeing how two different walks of life are affecting the sibling bond of Balto and Lisa, they was close when they were pups but now that Balto lives among and accepts humans that bond between brother and sister could shatter. What was revealed at the end of this chapter was pretty dark,I wonder what’s gonna happen now that Balto and Lisa have discovered the fur remains of their mother who was killed for sport by kodi’s owners. Balto was really close to his mother so I bet this will effect Balto’s outlook of humans especially that Lisa’s perspective of them being monsters is more validated at least in her own eyes.
I hope Balto can be rational here and remind himself that not all humans are like the hunters that took his mother, he has proof of that with Rosie and when he saved the town how the humans have accepted him. Balto helping his sister realize that is an entirely different story, even though Lisa has assumed that the humans killed their mother those claims now being verified will most likely slam the door on any possibility of Lisa ever coexisting with mankind. I just hope Balto can save his relationship with his sister, it’d be very sad to see it end that way especially when he had an inseparable bond with Lisa in their puppy days.
1/2 c22 Arika Koski 2021
Very depressing and I hope Balto and Lisa's siblings relationship doesn't strain.
1/1 c21 Furrylover number 8
I’m still here reading this! (To answer your question) but what happened to the other story ideas? Also this one I feel could continue but great nonetheless
1/1 c21 Furrylover number 8
Woah shit, another story that’s had a year gap? But what about your collab with Steve-just-a-gut? I think it was called Aleus family?
1/1 c20 Furrylover number 8
Wow I read the entire story In a night and I LOVE It! It’s great you did an outstanding job and btw what happened to the collab between you and Steve-just-a-gut?
1/1 c2 Furrylover number 8
It’s difficult to juggle all these fanfictions of balto but I like this one so far! Keep up the good work
6/22/2020 c20 Guest
Omg I just found this and it’s amazing I hope more soon
2/27/2020 c20 Arika Koski
Whoa nice chapter and I'm glad this story is not done and over with.
2/27/2020 c20 16JustASteveGut
Things got a little tense there.
2/27/2020 c20 18Titanflame
Hello my friend. I'm so happy that you are back to write this awesome story.
Amazing chapter as always. I can't wait to read the next chapter ;)
1/11/2020 c19 Arika Koski
I don't care if your a furry your profile name is decent and I would like to see Balto, Kodi and the white she-wolf having a conversation.
1/5/2020 c19 Whitewolf1224
Yeah I’d like to read that if you do decide to write it, perhaps with the white wolf explaining how she found Balto and them both catching up with one another, Also you being a furry doesn’t bother me at all so keep up the good work.
11/22/2019 c18 Arika Koski
Please come back and make new stories!
11/13/2019 c18 Arika Koski
Can you make a part 2 story of this please?
11/3/2019 c18 Whitewolf1224
This is one of my favorite flashback/prequel stories, never before have I been as interested in seeing what happened with balto’s relatives than I am with this story. I think I have a good idea who that she-wolf was who arrived at the cliffhanger and I’m glad she came to see him. It was cute how balto and Jenna met I could imagine her chasing balto to give him some food when she seen what condition he was in, that’s just how kind she was.. Steele and the other dogs in town were just assholes, it’s a shame they judged balto because of the misdeeds of others instead of giving him a chance. I’ll be interested in reading the story about Aleu and also the second part of this story, keep up the good work!.
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