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12/5/2020 c5 James Birdsong
Good fifth chapter
7/8/2020 c4 James Birdsong
Nice
2/20/2020 c1 2BboySwag
Wow, you've been busy lol. Okay, so I'm not really familiar with this anime or the ensemble of characters but I find the structure of your stories to be well-paced. I really liked the structuring of the paragraphs; they flow well. Furthermore, I have to comment on how much your writing style has evolved over the last few years. The way in which you were able to capture the environment of this sci-fi reality really inspired me to get back to writing. Nevertheless, you continue to produce excellent pieces of fanfics. Hopefully, you'll be more consistent than me lol
12/25/2019 c3 James Birdsong
Cool.
10/1/2019 c2 James Birdsong
Good chapter. Good work
7/9/2019 c1 James Birdsong
Good story
7/2/2019 c1 Emilandeela
Personally, I think this story is very well written! I really like how detailed and descriptive each scene taking place was! I was able to picture everything going on in my head too! Starting from Jurai’s National Assembly argument and Deputy Suboru speaking out his opinion towards the Emperor and the rest of the chamber, to the hostage crisis for when Kagato came in, the Galaxy police station, and then later the scene of Tenchi at his house with his grandpa sweeping with a broom, to the argument between Ayeka and Ryoko at the dinner table with Kiyone getting angry, I think the pacing between each scene was very well done, and each scene was very well written as well! It really was able to capture my attention as the reader! Overall, I enjoyed reading it, despite not having seen Tenchi Muyo or any of the other animes that this is based off of or inspired by, and I look forward to reading more!

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