11/30/2020 c8 AbbyAlexis
I loved this! the writing style of this was so detailed, descriptive and calming in a sense, and the story was of course the cutest friking thing ever lol
You gotta love jelous Coraline amirite?
I loved this! the writing style of this was so detailed, descriptive and calming in a sense, and the story was of course the cutest friking thing ever lol
You gotta love jelous Coraline amirite?
11/11/2020 c7 39purple devil 87
The writing quality is pretty good but the actual plot is a little cheezy. I feel you should focus more on the descriptive details of what is happening, and how to write something that could realistically happen yet still fit the confines of this universe. If you check over your story during the editing stage to see what you could describe or make more realistic then you'll get a better result with the resulting story.
The writing quality is pretty good but the actual plot is a little cheezy. I feel you should focus more on the descriptive details of what is happening, and how to write something that could realistically happen yet still fit the confines of this universe. If you check over your story during the editing stage to see what you could describe or make more realistic then you'll get a better result with the resulting story.
10/15/2019 c1 beautybxbbles
hi!~ i just found out about your story and, by the looks of it, i think i'm gonna love it!
hi!~ i just found out about your story and, by the looks of it, i think i'm gonna love it!
9/19/2019 c3 Ray
Nice story. It's kind of like a cliche', except for the 'hidden door' part. Love it. Wish there a rom-com like this between them in the movie.
Nice story. It's kind of like a cliche', except for the 'hidden door' part. Love it. Wish there a rom-com like this between them in the movie.
8/5/2019 c4 15Saphira Winters
I like it. I also liked how protective Wybie is with Coraline. Especially by telling her that it is not safe to just crawl into bed with random guys. Anyway keep up the good work. :-)
I like it. I also liked how protective Wybie is with Coraline. Especially by telling her that it is not safe to just crawl into bed with random guys. Anyway keep up the good work. :-)