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12/7/2020 c14 1XxHawktalonxX
NEW CHAPTER

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12/4/2020 c14 11SyfyGuy2
Ooh-hoo-hoo-hoo-hoo! :D :D A delightful new chapter to follow on from the last one, with some dread- and anxiety-inducing moments with the nightmare sequences that really made my blood run cold! :D

I've gotta say, Vivienne's nightmare, when I first read it in the preview, was delightfully grim, morbid and creepy for me. When I read Vivienne's name in the mirror fading and changing, and looked up what that Japanese letter means, my blood just ran cold. :O :O I was also satisfied at Vivienne decapitating the dream-Stenz for that look he gave her. :) It's almost a shame that Stenz isn't alive, so that Vivienne can give him a proper reason-you-suck speech calling him out on his flaws regarding his lack of respect for the Titans. :) I'm wondering if that voice on the radio urging Vivienne was her own subconscious or was San warning her, and I love how delightfully creepy the thing behind Vivienne's back representing Ichi or Ghidorah was. :) :)

I was pretty worried when San first started bleeding in the penultimate scene, fearing it was Ghidorah trying to attack him specifically due to regarding him as a shed skin while it's after Vivienne - not that my anxiety went down in the slightest when it affected Vivienne as well and she started having a psychic seizure. :O :O Truly, Ichi speaking like such an evil gentlemanly Bond-villain bureaucrat when Ghidorah contacted Viv 'n' San was blood-chilling for me. :O :O I'm guessing Ghidorah has learned to speak that way due to absorbing humanity's socio-cultural knowledge through the Many's victims. :O Also, I love how the who-wants-to-live-forever issue was brought up, 'cos I had been wondering about that. I'm wondering if Viv 'n' San are immortal like Ghidorah (if they are, all I can think of awaiting them in the centuries-long run is "You either die a hero or live long enough to become a villain"), or if due to their human-Ghidorah hybridisation, Viv 'n' San can now live for thousands of years beyond any human but will still have a limited lifespan and die in the far future (that could be interesting, considering San's terror of dying when he had his heel-realisation).

I was surprised you did a full, detailed scene of Monarch's livestream revealing Abraxas' true nature to the world, but I was very anxious when reading it. :o I was worried having Mariko who committed eco-terrorism at Outpost 58 running it wouldn't persuade the public to be sensible. The livestream scene has also gotten me wondering how much good it'll do with Bio-Major - being bureaucrats, that lot will probably be stupid and petty enough to care more about their money and reputation than the possibility they're unwittingly helping the world-ending Devil and its Many spread. My blood gets chilly again at the reveal that Bio-Major has made insemination treatments likely based on what Jonah gave them, wondering what the hell that means for all the Ghidorah-fetuses that are now out in the world. :O :O I'm wondering what'll happen with those - I can imagine them seeming ordinary and human at first, then when Ghidorah gives a signal to its extensions, they all transform and merge to re-form Ghidorah or Ghidorah's bigger-and-uglier new form. :O I'm wondering if Mariko deliberately kept information about San specifically to a minimum when explaining Abraxas beyond the fact he seems to be non-hostile because she knew it would make things worse if the world knew San really is the mind from Ghidorah's severed head and not just an offspring that was born in the transformation. Looking at the feedback to the livestream, I chuckled at the OfficialMothra comment. I'm honestly wondering if that commenter is actually Madison, one of the Chens, or Madison using the Chens' online account behind their backs. :'D

I chuckle at Madison's recollection of what her dad did with the bourbon after he barely avoided falling off the wagon. :'D I get the impression Thor is genuinely happy that the Monarch humans are paying such attention to his throat-singing like the ancient humans used to do. And I have to wonder if Mark and Brooks' conversation about the common syllables in Thor's vocalisations are a sign that, in relation to Thor and Viv 'n' San throat-singing back in Chapter 12, Monarch are going to develop a way to communicate more directly with Titans than the ORCA allowed, based on the Bone-Singers' old ways.

I seriously enjoyed reading Ren emerging from the ruined school and observing and thinking about the post-battle state of Yonaguni, with how it harkens back to the 2014 film's apocalyptic images of the destruction and ruins and viewing the Titans' rampages from the humans' perspective. ;) When Ren heard the voice on his phone, I at first honestly thought it was gonna turn out Vivienne can actually communicate with electronic devices over long distances and was doing this to find Ren, before the reveal it was the Monarch crew arriving. :) I was pleased to see Ren and Vivienne's relationship get full development in this chapter, explaining how they felt towards each-other regarding Vivienne and Serizawa's relationship and how their interactions for the years before Antarctica went. :) When Ren finally let out all his years' worth of oppressed feelings and resentments to Vivienne per her suggestion, to be honest I wished you'd actually written some dialogue like when Madison first raged at San, to make me more immersed, as just having general description of what Ren said made me a bit detached from that part of the scene. Also, was that a deliberate return-reference to 'Saraba' I spied in Ren's thoughts about what Vivienne would've done? ;)

I just burst out into laughter at seeing San use the middle-finger to greet the photographers! :'D :'D Man, that was brilliant, and I look forward to seeing it become a bit of a running gag. :'D Also, I very much loved and cheered on San giving Ren the stink-eye for hurting Vivienne with his resentments, even if I understood that Vivienne told Ren to let it out and Ren needed to finally let it out. :) :) I also loved San pissing Ichi off by telling Ghidorah that they're being just like the aliens who turned them into what they are, and it's a delight to see San just show his psychopath brothers that he's not taking orders from him anymore. :) :)

I got a really bad feeling about Ghidorah/Shi in Vivienne's nightmare coercing Vivienne's knowledge of her mother's whereabouts out of her despite the warnings over the radio. Between that, and the way there isn't much further mention of Susan from there in the chapter (as if in a Chekhov's-gun, forget-it-'til-it-comes-back-dramatically effect), I feel like Ghidorah or the Many is probably going to go after Susan Graham and/or attack Castle Bravo. :O Speaking of Susan, I was actually wondering after Chapter 13 what state she's currently in. I'm wondering now if she'll at first have a that-thing-is-not-my-daughter reaction to Abraxas, or if in a surprise twist, once she's calmed she'll be about the first human who doesn't hold reservations towards San but is instead grateful to him for bringing Vivienne back. I'm also actually wondering whether Susan will survive to the story's end, or will actually die and Vivienne will have to cope with that. (That would be particularly cruel, after how losing Serizawa already affected her and after she only recently learned her mother was alive.) :O

Now, onto my other thoughts and speculation about what might happen next. I'm wondering, based on that scene in an earlier chapter where Foster talked to Vivienne about working with people one doesn't like after Mark's briefing room rant if Vivienne will ever interact with her in the story. I'm also wondering if you intend to make any more shout-outs to the headcanon voices of Ghidorah's three heads (Zynbel, Grigori and Steve Blum) in their dialogue, as I can really imagine Ichi pulling off the "Did you think I would let you go?" taunts at Vivienne, and Ghidorah does seem like the type who'd nod his heads in half-agreement to Grigori's "What does it mean to live in truth?" monologue, only disagreeing with Grigori's admiration of mankind's sacrifice. ;) I've also actually been wondering rather randomly if San will ever pull the "Dramatic Exit" trick from 'Kung Fu Panda 3' on a Titan - it probably won't work on Ghidorah since it's absorbed humanity's knowledge, even without the fact Ichi, Ni and San-2 can multitask, but it could work on Rodan or other Titans who don't know humans' ways. x)

Overall, a short but delightful new chapter with the truth of Abraxas getting out, and with Vivienne and Ren's reconciliation, the delightful 2014-film apocalyptic imagery, and of course the White Walker blood-chills which the nightmares and psychic encounters with Ghidorah gave me. :o :o I look forward to seeing what happens next! :) :)
12/3/2020 c14 4Krazyfanfiction1
Neat.

I wonder if they can make actual drums for Thor?
10/10/2020 c13 11SyfyGuy2
Heh-heh. :) Well, this was one hell of an epic, lengthy, kaiju-battle and drama- and reveal-filled chapter! :) :)

I very much enjoyed Rodan's character development in this chapter. :) :) In that first scene, the way Viv 'n' San played to his ego and avoided insulting him to get the desired outcome out of him gave me Smaug-vibes, which fit with how Rodan's design in the film reminded me a bit of Smaug in the 'Hobbit' films. :) :) It was interesting to see Rodan's relationship with Viv 'n' San improve, and I love the way he tended to their injuries and the words of wisdom he gave Vivienne after fighting off the Skullcrawler-zombie. :)

I laughed at San's snark at Jonah about him getting ugly, and I also chuckled at the rather adorable way he reacted to being in water again. Him asking Vivienne if they can keep Mandazawa in response to the infant's affections also makes me chuckle. :) :) San is as adorable as ever, yet also frighteningly fearsome when he's angry or hates someone, like his sister. :) :) I genuinely experienced a bit of adult fear (or, well, sibling fear) alongside Vivienne when it looked like the Skullcrawler mutant was trying to rip San's head off so it could forcibly rejoin Vivienne to the main Ghidorah without him. :O I was surprised by the reveal that Ghidorah killed Thor's son in the past, and I loved San telling Thor he remembers it, which must've been some form of comfort or closure for Thor. :) When Vivienne was successfully thrown into an all-destroying rage by Ghidorah during the fight with the Skullcrawler-zombie, I was seriously worried with how Ghidorah's voices were elated that this meant Ghidorah had successfully gotten past her and San's mental defences again, save that San didn't seem worried like when Vivienne flipped on Rodan and Thorthe first time.

I was worried alongside Viv 'n' San when their torn-off arm didn't grow back, wondering if this meant they needed an electrical/radiation source to trigger the regeneration (like how Ghidorah used Rodan's volcano to regrow San/San-2), or if it was going to take Viv 'n' San's metamorphosis into their final form to regrow their arm. :O Then I also wondered if Rodan would give their severed arm back to them and they'd be able to reattach it. I was surprised when the arm twitched, and Viv 'n' San were able to reattach it just that. :) I guess the fact Viv 'n' San's healing powers work like this when it comes to severed limbs means they don't have to worry about clones of them regrowing from severed leftover pieces unlike when Ghidorah essentially cloned San. (I have been wondering, we know Ghidorah's origin, but I've been wondering considering San's statement Ghidorah has died and regenerated before, if it's possible Ghidorah knowingly or unknowingly duplicated itself or left more "shed skin" versions of its three minds peppered on alien worlds.) I guess Viv 'n' San's healing also means the siblings don't have to worry about being separated from each-other or accidentally generating a separate clone of one of them if Ghidorah tries ripping off one of their heads. I've gotta wonder, was that thunderstorm at Yonaguni throughout the battle caused by Viv 'n' San, by the Ghidorah-Skullcrawler zombies, or a bit of both?

Speaking of Ghidorah's zombie meat-puppets, I was genuinely grossed out by the Skullcrawler-zombie that Rodan, Viv 'n' San fought, finding the squirming Ghidorah-zombies fused into it and the way it was using them all to speak particularly horrifying. :O :O Looks like a fate worse than death indeed... The zombie sprouting a flytrap-appendage from its rear gave me strong 'The Thing' vibes. The Ghidorah-zombie reanimating Manda gave me almost-instant undead-Viserion vibes (not least because of the one missing eye alongside Manda being draconic), and I grin with glee at the thought of him rising. (I can hear ‘Awaken’ by Valerie Broussard playing, actually.) :D :D Also, the overall idea of Ghidorah seeking to reanimate and assimilate more dead things reminds me of the Night King and his Army of the Dead in 'Game of Thrones' overall.

I was surprised to both see Jonah return and see he's become merged with Ghidorah's zombies so soon after the "operation" scene with Travis' corpse in the old outpost. I was surprised and loved reading the moment Vivienne ripped Jonah off of the Skullcrawler-zombie and crushed him, and reading how Vivienne felt immediately afterwards. And I genuinely felt a large drop of pity (just a drop) for the dead villain, when Ghidorah's thoughts revealed that Jonah thought all this time he could use Ghidorah's capabilities to bring his dead daughter back.

Aside from the Skullcrawler-zombies, I'm wondering what'll happen with the three pregnant women, and what Ghidorah's ultimate endgame with them is. From this chapter, it sounds like Ghidorah intends to integrate itself in multiple human forms into the population, like how one in every four people is demographically believed to be a psychopath who can pass as normal in plain sight. :O It sounds like these pregnant women/children are Ghidorah's hidden ace, and like Viv 'n' San, the Titans and Monarch not knowing about them could give Ghidorah a dangerous advantage. :O I've also been wondering since the last chapter, if there's three pregnant women from the Ural outpost for each of Ghidorah's three minds - one has Ichi's mind inside the womb, one has Ni's and the other has San-2's. :O I've furthermore been wondering since Chapter 12 if "the Many" are another 'Shin Godzilla' reference, since they do seem a lot like Shin Godzilla's fifth-form humanoid "spawn", except they're merging together instead of dividing. When I think about it in that respect, I'm wondering if Ghidorah's strategy after its defeat at Boston is to permanently assimilate traits from humans due to their major contribution to its downfall making Ghidorah see them as an opponent it should adapt to. After all, Ichi, Ni and San-2 might've worked out humans' modern technology must've been responsible for reviving and overloading Godzilla before he miraculously showed up in Boston after the Oxygen Destroyer, plus there's the fact that humans distracting Ghidorah with the ORCA was what stopped Ghidorah from sucking Godzilla dry in time before he went Burning Godzilla. (Which brings me to a thought of mine - I'm wondering whether or not Ghidorah in this story would remember what happened in Boston or after San's head was severed, since Ichi, Ni and San-2 have regenerated from San's severed Ghidorah-head. Perhaps they learned everything that happened to their previous self with the Mass Awakening and Boston from assimilating Jonah's and the other Ghidorah-zombies' minds.)

I delighted in reading Ghidorah's thoughts on Vivienne's unstoppable-rage against the Skullcrawler-zombie. Honestly, Ichi deciding it was "interesting" outright made my blood run cold immediately. :O And it was amazingly discomforting to see Ni's contemptuous opinion of Vivienne turn around in response to what had happened (who would've thought a raving dragon-head going from hating to admiring you could be so much worse than them continuing to hate you). I love and am disturbed by the revelation that Ghidorah wants to assimilate Vivienne and turn her into its fourth "Shi" head. Kinda reminds me of a certain 'KOTM' headcanon of my own I came up with about the origins of Ghidorah's heads (not gonna post said headcanon here because I don't know yet if I'll use it in a future fanfiction, but I can share it via PM if you're curious). Considering Ghidorah's backstory in Chapter 10, I can actually imagine the idea that Ghidorah wants to turn Vivienne into a fourth head will lead to Vivienne giving it a psychic "reason you suck"/break-them-by-talking speech about how Ghidorah wants to destroy everything yet can't settle for killing her or for one of its heads being truly alone, which will thoroughly drive Ichi murderously mad. I'm also feeling a slight chill run down my spine, thinking of the revelation that Ghidorah has learned things it didn't know before about how humans have remembered it as the Devil from assimilating Jonah's mind. :O

Honestly, I was pretty anxious to see Mandazawa's birth and his first interactions with his mother and uncle in this chapter. :) And was that a ‘Jurassic Park’ reference I detected when Mandazawa was being urged to break out of the egg? :) I'm glad the egg hatched before this chapter's end, in the final scene, and I can already see how Mandazawa's going to be a hyperactive little handful! :D :D I was surprised Viv 'n' San weren't the first thing/s Mandazawa saw upon hatching, since I assumed he'd imprint like birds when they hatch. I was surprised by the indication with the piece of Godzilla's perspective, that rather than being maybe-magic,-maybe-mundane, Mandazawa probably is literally Serizawa reincarnated without his memories. I don't know at this point whether you're still going to go for the maybe-magic-maybe-mundane approach to that. But if Mandazawa is confirmed in-universe as being Serizawa reincarnated... I've gotta say, I came across the theory on your Tumblr that Serizawa was unknowingly and unconsciously remembering a previous life when he said his last words to Godzilla, and I think it could work amazingly. I was extremely excited in the buildup to Mandazawa being named, and I was surprised that they just gave him his father's and species' name instead of adding 'zawa' on the end. I look forward to seeing what'll happen next with the little bundle of mischief, since it looks like Ghidorah has temporarily retreated and Viv 'n' San and the Titans have gotten another reprieve (or so they think, what with being unaware of Ghidorah's "brood-mothers"). :)

I've gotta say, I love your choice of voices for San and Mandazawa. :) Mandazawa's chirps appropriately remind me of a certain winged Permian lizard character in an ITV sci-fi series from my childhood. :) And I love how San's voice sounds truly draconic and like it's a balance between Ichi's Zynbel-voice and Ni's Steve Blum voice (I always did like to imagine that San's voice actually sounds more like Ichi's than Ni's does), plus I can truly picture that voice being stilted and halting on San before he develops an accent.

I wonder what'll happen next after Monster X's display on the beach and Viv 'n' San's interactions with Ren and the sailors. :) Yonaguni has gotten glimpses both of how Viv 'n' San are benevolent towards humans and other Titans and will even go out of their way to aid them, and also of how ferocious the duo are when they're truly angry at an enemy. :) Considering humans were stupid enough to remain paranoid of Monster X even when it was interacting positively with Ghidorah's arch-enemy and Mothra herself, I wouldn't be surprised if people tragically ignore the former and focus on the latter, at least until the news of Viv 'n' San's true nature gets out. I think Monarch would be really wise to NOT delay revealing the truth about Monster X to the public after this, since I suspect this development won't exactly DETER hackers from trying to get the information from Monarch and release it for them - plus Monarch are gonna have to explain the giant zombie-mutants Viv 'n' San, Godzilla and Rodan fought.

Onto my other speculations about what'll happen in the story. :) I've recently been wondering if Godzilla's lesson to Viv 'n' San about how humans will come to their aid if they protect them foreshadows humans who don't yet know of Viv 'n' San's true nature coming to their rescue in the darkest hour. :) I have been wondering how and when Viv 'n' San will transform into their teased final form - after the reveal about Ghidorah's plans for Vivienne in this chapter, I'm wondering now if the final transformation will occur when Ghidorah begins absorbing Vivienne, and she transforms into her and San's final form due to the partial assimilation process before she breaks free.

Overall, a great, epic chapter with good kaiju-battling action to break the suspense and buildup that's been well-executed over the last several chapters, plus some great development, and an AWESOME unstoppable-rage moment from Viv 'n' San. :) I look forward to seeing what happens next for the Two Who Are One (LOVE gorkmalork's nickname for the duo :) :)).
10/9/2020 c13 Scarease
so need help G man locate the control cancer that manipulate the corpse.
8/28/2020 c9 4Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Holy smokes! This was FANTASTIC! For some odd reason, Ghidorah is kinda reminding me a bit of Final Fantasy VII’s Jenova. Brrr...

And I have to admit, Godzilla truly IS King! Powerful, yet also wise beyond his years!

You also did extremely well with the other Kaiju! Good job!
8/28/2020 c8 Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Whoa...
8/28/2020 c7 Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Whoa...looks like the truth is out now! So what’ll happen next? And what did Mothra do in order to seal Vivienne in a bone egg?
8/28/2020 c6 Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Wicked AWESOME!
8/27/2020 c5 Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Nice! This chapter definitely lives up to its name/runic symbol! Well done! And man, I was SUPER close to crying at all the memory viewing and emotion!
8/27/2020 c4 Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Dang! I know I mentioned such a thing, but even I didn’t know how soon you’d put it into play!

And Eihwaz...does this thirteenth rune kinda represent "truth" in this scenario? Like how knowledge can be valuable and informing, yet when delivered harshly, it can cause such pain?
8/27/2020 c3 Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Excellent work! Oh? So Graham wants to see Serizawa again hm? Will the news of his current "status" break what little hold she already has over herself? Hmm... either way, it’s bound to be an interesting reaction!
8/25/2020 c2 Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Whoa...this is REALLY getting GOOD! Crazy, but good!
8/24/2020 c1 Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Hm! Fascinating...
8/24/2020 c12 Brachydios1021
I have a feeling this ain’t gonna go well...
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