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7/17 c35 Potassium and Oxygen
Wow, I laughed at the description of Belle's and Sample's hair.
And Felix and Elastico have golden retrievers! I imagined this picture of them dancing around and I had to give myself a short break from reading, given I couldn't stop giggling!
But then it got even better. A push-up competition between Yuna and Kurenai was mentioned. That was just perfect, I would have joined them if I could! Push-ups, in my opinion, represent determination, dedication, and striving to be the best version of yourself. It feels silly I caught on to such a tiny detail and that push-ups mean so much to me, but I just love them. As well as, of course, your little details!
Angel blowing a raspberry into Stitch's belly cracked me up, too.
I understand Stitch's doubts and anxiety about the change. To move forward, sometimes you have to jump into the unknown, with no knowledge as to where this will lead you. That can be scary.
But it's good Lilo was there to comfort him.
And wow! Stitch got sent into 2150! I haven't expected that.
Akela...The Councilman. When Stitch was looking into the album and discovering their future, it touched my heart. Only a few photos, and we are still able to imagine the whole scene that had lead to them.
I also wanted to say that your description of that future world was really cool. And that moment with playing volleyball, too.
Yeah... I almost shed a tear at the end.
Now THAT was an absolutely amazing ending. If that was a film, I'd say - poetic cinema.
7/17 c34 Potassium and Oxygen
Oh gosh, I certainly didn't expect to be mentioned here.
Seeing that I made someone happy with my words and actions... I'm touched, and eager to make more people smile. I think I've gotten the final push to battle my anxiety and try to create and actually show it. All the time, I've been creating quietly and only for myself, fearing that once I begin to show my work, I'd feel overwhelmed and quickly quit.
But now I feel encouraged to at least try.
I think I will start with drawings, as it is the safest and most comfortable way for me to express myself.
Maybe I won't be able to do much, because it's very hard to keep up with my studies (especially since I do a lot of extra work), but I'm on summer break now, so... I will try to rediscover my passion.
Science and art don't have to exclude each other, after all.
Your words mean a lot to me, it doesn't matter if it's a story or just a few nice words directed towards me, I'm happy someone encouraged me to create, even if it was unintentional.
7/13 c34 CROLUKA
This came…. unexpected. The last LAST Chapter being in the Future with an Being who will be part of the Ohana by the time. This is really beautiful, all of it. I thank you for this Journe, I'm gonna miss it waiting every Month for a chapter but a great ending is a great ending. Now my Favorite Chapter, Character and Song for you.

ChapterThe Long and winding Road“. Not only I found another Beatles song for my list but just the impact it had was great and Jumba was a Highlight in this chapter.

Character: 627/Daniel. I've read countless of other versions of 627, but this one is my favorite of them all. Making him a being with a kind was a great Idea. I am now sadder every time I see him in the series because of the thought he can never be turned good, but this Fanfic made it and it was unbelievable great, besides I never knew I wanna have a couple between him and Chopsuey haha.

SongStairway to Heaven“. By hearing it I asked myselfWhy didn’t I found it earlier. I just love the text the lyrics and the Rythm of Led Zeppelin in this one. To Flute the Song really fitted well and…. oh god I love this song

I wanna be honest: Every Season I always hoped for Dark End to appear (I imaged King Crimson Music with him XD) but in this one it shouldn’t be. Not a criticism don’t get me wrong just expectings.

Now realtalk. I love this story and I wish you every Luck in your life now that you leave FanFiction as a hobby. I hope you can make it as a Novelist and have a happy life, goodbye man

Winstonkong
7/13 c34 SapphireFlame910
I'll say, before I read the next chapter, that I only recently discovered you. This has been a great story, and I really admire you giving the lesser-known experiments the spotlight. You write them really well, and your plotlines have been imaginative and compelling.
Oh, and about what you said about Revolution, gotta say I enjoyed that one too. Yeah, it approaches L&S from a different angle, but the best reimaginings are the ones that can do exactly that and pull it off. In my opinion, Revolution was a success.
I look forward to reading the next chapter when I get home later today!
7/7 c33 Potassium and Oxygen
Oh wow. That was the last chapter.
Sorry I haven't been commenting lately. I've had a hard time bringing myself to sit down and write anything meaningful, something that wasn't too short for my liking. (I'm such a perfectionist, haha)
But I read all of these episodes and enjoyed them immensely, some of them made me emotional... I can't stress enough how engaging these were, for example I always get a bit discouraged when new characters (OC's) appear in fanfiction, but here it didn't happen! All of those characters were unique and truly interesting!
I am seriously amazed by your writing skills.
And I've written so before, but I also really like the songs implemented here, most of which I didn't know about beforehead, so then I had something new to listen to.
Also, this story has helped me learn English. A LOT. For me, you use really advanced words when writing, especially when describing emotions. Several times, I had to translate and translate and translate!
That was a meaningful experience for me, because I love new opportunities to learn! :)
So, thank you for being so committed to, and passionate about writing this fic. It was (is!) one of my favorite ones!
7/5 c33 CROLUKA
Wow. A great ending. Well, I guess this is it. I let you know that this is now my second most liked LiloStitch Fanfic (one is Empire of the Pacific, but that’s old). I saw it being complete so I guess there will be no more. Thank you for writing this amazing story, it was a journey,it made me search fo some new amazing songs that I hear now and made me sometimes emotional. Good bye and maybe next time.

If it’s the finish…..R.I.P Dark End XD (I am joking, it’s not serious, well great story again)
6/27 c32 CROLUKA
Okay

This chapter is by far the magnum Opus of This Fanfic. It had so much depth and power in it that it made me feel with the characters. I loved when the Man realized his mistake and when Checkers was finally ready to come back home. A great chapter and I can’t wait for the last one.
6/9 c31 CROLUKA
Uhhh it’s about to get real. I hope Stitch and Co. will succeed and free checkers from this man. Great chapter again
6/1 c30 11OMNISENSE95
My only criticism is that Checkers'... host doesn't have a name yet... or is that the point?
5/31 c30 CROLUKA
Oh no. Someone uses checkers to make his own Utopia. I really didn’t see that coming, I swear. A good chapter I'm excited to see how this whole situation will end.
5/19 c29 CROLUKA
Yesterday I had no time but yet I’ve saw the new chapter. It’s great, I always liked this situations in story’s when Mertle changes and this time even doing new things. Hamsterviel is now in Jail, with some music from stitch. I wonder if he gave up, and what happens with Gantu. I really enjoyed this chapter and can’t wait for the next one
5/18 c29 OMNISENSE95
At least she's trying. That's what's important. I actually like that you didn't have Mertle pull a complete 180 overnight, this is going to be a long, tedious process. To be honest, I'm looking forward to every second of it.
5/2 c28 OMNISENSE95
So... You were clearly going for some sort of moral here, but I'm still trying to work out what it is... good job regardless, though.
5/2 c28 CROLUKA
The next chapter is here. A surprise this early in May but a welcome one (haha). This time with Jason and slick a favorite experiment of mine with the song American pie as the Title, that is a really good piece of music. All the way good chapter again
4/19 c27 CROLUKA
The next chapters here. This Time with Ai, but also Carmen, who was on tour and really wanted to see her Family again. I'm glad they could make something up and I really liked it that Carmen now lives with Ai and her older sister. Great chapter I’m looking forward to the next chapter
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