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12/4/2020 c16 31Yolashillinia
Huzzah for Trahearne! You've upped the ante quite a bit; this will let him show off more clearly than ever. I know he can pull it off!
12/4/2020 c7 Yolashillinia
Fort Concordia is Trahearne's biggest in-game opportunity to show off so I always squee when it comes up! Nice job!
11/22/2020 c17 TheVikingSkald
Still an awesome story!
9/24/2020 c16 TheVikingSkald
Woot! Keep it up!
9/5/2020 c15 14Tiffany Smithi
OMIGOSH YOU FORGOT TO USE A PERIOD TO END THE CHAPTER.

I... I am speechless, quite so, OH MAN this was mainly a Fiona Perspective chapter, (and my am i glad) but like... CONSEQUENCES! There totally ARE consequences.

Great chapter, thanks for getting me to read it.
9/4/2020 c15 TheVikingSkald
A fantastic chapter, Poor Fiona though, hopefully she gets rescued soon, but I think she's going to end up saving herself now, would be hilarious the group comes and you have Fiona sitting on a pile of unconscious flame legion charr, like "So what took you guys so long?" I'm getting that vibe from reading this chapter.
8/10/2020 c13 TheVikingSkald
Great chapter, also damn Fiona’s having a hard time hope they rescue her soon. Keep it up looking forward to the next chapter.
8/6/2020 c12 Falcon Swiss
I like the part about Tonn doing CPR on PC Tiffany, that was hilarious, (and also serious, since she needed it.) Good chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
7/22/2020 c10 Tiffany Smithi
"Sorry" Grania whispers as they head down the stairs to the dungeon. "But the males have been known to kill the females that didn't cooperate."
Fiona blinks at Grania as she hurries away. "So... she doesn't WANT to cooperate? Interesting...

Yeah, this is good information, good start. I mean, not the clawing up of Fiona, but like, the fact that she can withstand all those scratches and still think reasonably is amazing.
Also, I like Eda, she's awesome.
"Oh, yes" Eda replies cheerfully. "You're a prisoner, and all prisoners have to die. That's what my primus said. Because prisoners are ALIVE, and that means they're not dead, so we get to kill them so they're properly dead."
7/14/2020 c9 TheVikingSkald
Well uh shit. Someone needs to mount a rescue, dang girl you know how to make things tense. Keep it up.
7/9/2020 c8 TheVikingSkald
Damn, things are rather troublesome for the Pact, You’ll find Leon nursing a bottle of rum and toasting the fall of the pact to the elder dragon if they don’t find that Mesmer and get their acts together.
7/1/2020 c7 Fiona Sparrow
"Tiffany frowns at the report. When did Fiona learn to write legibly?"

Heyyy! Learn to write your own letters before you criticize someone much better than you!
6/30/2020 c7 TheVikingSkald
Great chapter, damn about the Spar Warband but I think I know what you are going to do with the survivor, and I look forward to the next chapter.
6/22/2020 c6 TheVikingSkald
A fantastic chapter just as I expected, yay Leon had his 5 minutes of fame. I look forward to the next chapter.
6/15/2020 c5 TheVikingSkald
Sorry for the lack of reviews these last few chapters have been great, I’ve been busy dealing with real life that I haven’t had time to read let alone review. I’m excited to see where this story goes and for the return of Vargok Hellforge and Leon Traydor. Keep it up you magnificent woman!
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