10/5 c1 29Edhla
Don't give up! :) There's nothing in this chapter I can see that needs to be taken down, though I totally get that thing where your prose improves over time and you want your work to reflect the best you are now, not the best you might have been years ago. But your storytelling instincts are strong and you have a great cinematic way of thinking out scenes. Dialogue is solid too. Keep going :)
Don't give up! :) There's nothing in this chapter I can see that needs to be taken down, though I totally get that thing where your prose improves over time and you want your work to reflect the best you are now, not the best you might have been years ago. But your storytelling instincts are strong and you have a great cinematic way of thinking out scenes. Dialogue is solid too. Keep going :)
9/8 c42 1KaylaBignall
Dean better hold to his word and take her to see her grandparents! Ahhh excitingggg love it as always
Dean better hold to his word and take her to see her grandparents! Ahhh excitingggg love it as always
8/29 c41 Gabrielle
I swear if Gabe dies...I'll do nothing because I'm too lazy. But the point still stands! Please don't kill Gabe! I Love the chapter!
I swear if Gabe dies...I'll do nothing because I'm too lazy. But the point still stands! Please don't kill Gabe! I Love the chapter!
8/29 c41 KaylaBignall
Oh nooo Dean’s gonna be mad for a hot minute isn’t he *sigh* as always, amazing chapter! Loved it!
Oh nooo Dean’s gonna be mad for a hot minute isn’t he *sigh* as always, amazing chapter! Loved it!