Just In
Community
Forum
More
for Afterwards

5/22/2020 c3 4Scarlet7
Fuuko getting jealous at the waitress got me chuckling hee hee. Raiha really did have millions of fangirls during the UBS days, right? The sequence of events and activities that Raiha and Neon did after SODOM could be considered canon enough! I just think that it would've taken them a lot longer to do all those things (maybe a year, at least?) but then again, they're extraordinary people! I really hope you write the 4th chapter *pretty please* because I'm getting too invested in your fic (o)v
5/22/2020 c2 Scarlet7
This is so cute, Fuuko-chan trying to figure out her feelings and learning to accept that she *is* in love~ with Raiha-kun, of course! You know, this chapter actually reminds me of a really good RaiFuu fic (probably my favorite one), "I Will Find You" by tenshi no ai (not sure if she has changed her pen name). As a fellow RaiFuu fan, I recommend you read it! Anyway, I'm going to read the next chapter now _
5/22/2020 c1 Scarlet7
Lovely! I love raifuu too and I can actually imagine this happening because all of them are very in character. Their reactions were spot-on thanks for this :)
4/9/2020 c3 tripletreat
Hi there! Sorry too lazy to login to my account, but really wanted to post a review.
It's been so long that I read Flame of Recca, and here I am reading it again. And I remember again how soooo attached I am with Raiha Fuuko pairing!
I love their interactions, and basically I love Raiha! Haha

I was searching for Raiha Fuuko fanfic and quite surprised that Tokiya Fuuko dominates the fandom. Oh well

I am lucky to find your fanfic. The story great so far, you've come up with a great plot. Intertwining what could have been after SODOM and make it more relatable to modern world now.
Love it! Eager to see for next chapters :)
9/18/2019 c3 65MorgantheFae
Everybody loves Raiha, don’t they? Well, he’s pretty and (mostly) a nice guy, so i guess it can’t be helped. Even if he acted like a jerk, like Mii-chan does, it still wouldn’t stop people from liking him, so he’s probably got the right idea by not encouraging or discouraging them, just letting them think what they like. Of course, if someone were to make a move on him, i’m sure he’d speak up, but that’s not what’s going on here.
Oooooh, of course! I never made the connection between Joker’s trident still standing and the other madougu being destroyed, but i really should have. You’re right, that’s probably what was going on there!
9/15/2019 c2 5G-Cleft
Hi, reynn! My first time to review a RaiFuu fic, since I'm a solid ToFuu fan, but like I said, the active authors in the FOR fandom should give each other moral support. ;)

That said, I love the plot, how you endeavor to explain the transition from the end of the manga to how they lived normal lives. For Chapter 1, still heartbroken when Kaoru left... the manga writers should have made Domon go with Kurei instead, hahaha.

Very, VERY curious about who the man Raiha thinks loves Fuuko is. :)

I liked how Raiha is portrayed through the conversation of the girls, that scene when Ganko said, "That sounds like Raiha-san."

I like the comic relief too. It's so just like Recca to want to break into a human experiment facility. I'm curious about what happened in that SODOM expedition and I'm glad you will tackle it in Chapter 3.

Yaaaaaaay, Tokiya is in this fic! :)

Good job!

You might want to check on verb tense consistency. It's a common practice to use the past tense in writing 3rd person POVs, but when "The Hunger Games" entered the scene, writing in present tense became "in" all of a sudden. There are advantages and disadvantages though. But the key is to choose one and stick to it.

Keep writing! You're doing a great job.
9/4/2019 c1 65MorgantheFae
Ah, i’ve wanted to write my own follow-up to the manga, but my draft focuses on Aoi. It’s nice to see everyone actually leaving together; normally this kind of story would have a bit of a time gap between the final battle and the others picking back up. i’m laughing at Raiha a little bit, because he really should have realized Fuuko wouldn’t just let him go so easily. A slice-of-life type story with these fools would be fun to read.

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service