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11/1/2019 c1 James Penman
While I did like the chemistry you've created between characters here the message came across overly preachy given the context of what is happening in the story. I feel the message falls flat because there is no backing to why these treasures must remain where they are.

I would take the approach of establishing character motives and establishing important details beforehand to flesh out your stories more, even with one shots. For example a paragraph keying the reader into the knights personality alongside with some background on the tomb would have added some much needed context.

That being said its my only real critique. Your grammar and punctuation like all of us only needs some practice but I see real potential here in your writing style.

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