6/30 c5 Pabs117
The chapter was lovely, I was so happy when the update notification appear!
Good luck next chapter, I can't wait to see more of those two! :D
The chapter was lovely, I was so happy when the update notification appear!
Good luck next chapter, I can't wait to see more of those two! :D
1/2 c1 Guest
Guardians of the Galaxy: Rocket Raccoon... Nice choice of reference
Guardians of the Galaxy: Rocket Raccoon... Nice choice of reference
12/1/2020 c4 6Drahjan
Pfft. McGucket. That's a funny reference you threw in. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Pfft. McGucket. That's a funny reference you threw in. Can't wait to see what happens next.
10/24/2020 c4 45NijiBrush
I really enjoyed this, it was very in character! Can't wait to see where it goes from here!
I really enjoyed this, it was very in character! Can't wait to see where it goes from here!
6/16/2020 c4 5f.Sofy-Chan X3
no se porque pero me imaginé al padre de Karmi encontrando a los dos juntos conversando y que este malinterpreta la situación y piensa que Hiro es el novio de Karmi jaja xD
perdona que no haya comentado antes, me gusta tu fanfic
en serio, eres otra escritora increíble :D
espero que lo continúes pronto :3
En serio te gusto mi dibujo?
deberías ver lo que he dibujado hasta ahora
seguro que te van ha encantar! x3
Estoy usando el traductor de Google n.?'
I don't know why but I imagined Karmi's father finding the two together talking and that he misinterprets the situation and thinks that Hiro is Karmi's boyfriend haha xD
Sorry I haven't commented before, I like your fanfic
seriously you're another amazing writer :D
hope you continue soon :3
Did you really like my drawing?
you should see what I've drawn so far
surely you will love it! x3
I'm using google translator n.?'
no se porque pero me imaginé al padre de Karmi encontrando a los dos juntos conversando y que este malinterpreta la situación y piensa que Hiro es el novio de Karmi jaja xD
perdona que no haya comentado antes, me gusta tu fanfic
en serio, eres otra escritora increíble :D
espero que lo continúes pronto :3
En serio te gusto mi dibujo?
deberías ver lo que he dibujado hasta ahora
seguro que te van ha encantar! x3
Estoy usando el traductor de Google n.?'
I don't know why but I imagined Karmi's father finding the two together talking and that he misinterprets the situation and thinks that Hiro is Karmi's boyfriend haha xD
Sorry I haven't commented before, I like your fanfic
seriously you're another amazing writer :D
hope you continue soon :3
Did you really like my drawing?
you should see what I've drawn so far
surely you will love it! x3
I'm using google translator n.?'
6/15/2020 c4 1RoboticsHiro
I really love this story! Your writing is incredible, and so is your storytelling. Good writing mixed with my favourite movie and ship equals my love!
I really love this story! Your writing is incredible, and so is your storytelling. Good writing mixed with my favourite movie and ship equals my love!
6/9/2020 c4 Pabs117
The new chapter was great, happy to see an update, am happy to see more from Hiro and Karmi, as well from the team.
I can't wait for the next chapter, good luck! :D
The new chapter was great, happy to see an update, am happy to see more from Hiro and Karmi, as well from the team.
I can't wait for the next chapter, good luck! :D
5/18/2020 c3 MidnightBean
Please! It's may. I will pray to ARES of all gods, if you update. By the Angel, this is so good.
Please! It's may. I will pray to ARES of all gods, if you update. By the Angel, this is so good.
4/19/2020 c3 Nik
Love your story! Ooh wasn't expecting that from Karmi to captain cutie! It's interesting, I'm excited to see where it goes!
Love your story! Ooh wasn't expecting that from Karmi to captain cutie! It's interesting, I'm excited to see where it goes!
3/17/2020 c3 Guest
Hey was wondering if you’re going to update just wanted to know whether ur alive or not or if u discontinued hope nothing personal is happening best wishes
Hey was wondering if you’re going to update just wanted to know whether ur alive or not or if u discontinued hope nothing personal is happening best wishes