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for The Amulet Book 1: The Stonekeeper

5/20 c7 16Draconos13
Looking over this story as a whole, I like what you have done to expand the characters' mindsets and motivations in writing. The pictures in the novel can get readers to develop similar reasons for the characters' feelings on their own, but putting it in words like this provides a different way to understanding what's going on in these people's heads.

I appreciate the extra development you put into the characters' personalities and how they interact with each other, too. The robots have some extra uniqueness, while the Hayes family have more connection than what I first considered when I read the novel for myself. This helped me like (or dislike) them more than before.

Overall, I enjoyed your writing and will read on to the next entry in the series when I can. Thanks for making the story!

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