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1h c117 5whencowsfly06
Ohh, the suspense! When will Remus get the courage to tell Sirius? I'm really excited.
Anyway, I love the story so far. Keep it up!
7h c117 17ChristineBH
James is so sweet. A spoiled rich kid? God yes! Knows that a gift made with lots of efforts means more than money? Also yes
11h c117 snowypeakss
Awee cutee and that game sounds AWESOME! Ah I really like that.. Hope the computer will work soon!
Thanks for the chapter, Tobi :)
14h c1 1ansuyasharmen
Please update I have been waiting for you to ever since you published your last chapter and maybe even more... Anyway if you can't that's fine too I'm just sooo bored right know. Thanks!
12/25 c73 8BellatrixBlack1997
I never cease to be surprised at how real your characters feel. Remus obviously suffering from some form of Stockholm Syndrome and unable to defend himself is heartbreaking but sadly I feel it would be accurate. And I love the way you capture the emotions of being twelve (terrifying) and growing up. Ah, I can’t wait for Remus to finally gain the confidence he deserves and pursue a relationship with Sirius. I know I’ve said it before but I have to say again, you are a brilliant writer and I’m so excited to see how Remus matures in future installments
12/25 c116 1TichePotato
Yotz! It's not the Chamber of Slythrin, but it's damned close.
12/25 c116 Bean89
“Dumbledore wore sparkly, glittery things all the time!”
Maybe not the best example of a straight person wearing that sort of thing Remus
12/25 c116 snowypeakss
Ahgss poor boy.. and the book on bloodmagic is not a good sign..
Thanks for the chapter!
12/25 c116 17ChristineBH
You know that you live in a really homophobic society when you're think that it's much more exciting to read about illegal spells than it's scary being caught with them but having a talk about a homophobic slur makes you throw up.

At least the other marauders are so nice even if they don't have the interpersonal skills to see that Remus wanted to explore more. I think everyone wants friends who'll wear glitter for you
12/25 c116 1ansuyasharmen
Happy Christmas!
Also thanks very much for the chapter. It's definitely worth waiting for.
12/24 c115 14lupinswhore
Everything’s been so sweet so far! The apology, ahhhhhhhh! I can go on and on about how happy I am they made up—Sirius needing reassurance was very relatable too. Such sweethearts. The fact that he even made a letter with underlines and sad faces, Sirius is so precious! On a darker note, I’m anxiously anticipating when Remus realises what “poof” means. I just know his “box” will explode. Other than that, Remus and David bonding over muggle music! It was so adorable. I just knew that Remus was an Elton stan. Since this is the 70s, I’m quite excited to see the uproar of Queen come along too. It’s a hc of mine that Wolfstar love Queen and the song “Somebody to Love”. Anyways, I can’t wait for the next chapter!
12/22 c115 TardisGirlWho
Well, Remus and I certainly have one thing in common. We both like Chopin. Are there any other fans out there? I wonder if Remus' eclectic taste in music reflects the author's taste?
12/22 c115 1Target-Run-And-Done
Hfjdjdfbdn DAVID im love and the music i muuussiicccccc im a little obsedsed with 70s rock
12/22 c115 snowypeakss
Ahh he still didn't figure it out... And hey, interesting, possible friendship with Struthers? I love that he listens to rock music haha
Thanks for the chapter!
12/21 c114 3dolphin77
This really brightened up my Monday. Even though the beginning was angsty and I was ready to whack Remus with a chair and give him a hug the whole time. In that order. Remy needs to learn to think brain. But also

The Transformations: Much sadness, much... :( poor Remy. Much wishing that he isn't a werewolf (wasn't? no one knows)

The Visit From Peter and James: Just wanted you to know, I've been so invested in this, that I've called Percy Weasley and Percy Jackson Peter. Multiple times. I was just thinking about Peter Pettigrew so much. Also, poor Remy, he was so crushed when Sirius didn't show up. I want to throw away the chair and just give him a hug and wrap him in blankets. Side note, Remy would look so cute wrapped up in blankets. Also... I want to get that chair again and whack Spinnet. Not in a "oh-my-god-you-oblivious-almond-please-learn-to-*like*-yourself" kinda way but a "I-swear-to-god-if-you-ever-say-that-to-Remus-again-I-will-kill-you" :(

APOLOGY: SDFHSJAIOJFHSJA FINIALLY (wish I could be on the server rejocing but alas I will rejoice here) IT'S JUST... THE BEST AND THEN THEY'RE FRIENDS AGAIN AND I DUNNO WHAT TO SAY!

Other Stuff: (spoilers, stuff said on the server, nothing major, just a plot point)
When I saw the title of the chapter I thought it was the punch and then I realized "of course not" and now I think "yeah lol no" so I *really* don't think that the punch will be anytime soon but I don't think that Remy would have ever punched Spinnet for that because... like he isn't that person, he gets angry but like... he wouldn't get angry about this. Still holding on to that it's probably one of his friends. Don't think he'd ever punch someone who didn't know he was a werewolf. Unless self-preservation goes out the window because he just gets angry.

- Leo who cannot think and is trying to type as quickly as possible
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