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5/3 c11 9Paladin777
The Zidane and Elsie interaction was sweet. What I'm curious about is how garland got his mitts on Zidane in the first place, assuming the dreams are memories as opposed to just dreams, and how Zidane escaped.
4/17 c7 Paladin777
Kuja's arrival was kinda neat! I really hope to read more Of the theatrical poetry that is his way of speaking! You started strong, but the scene ended before I got my fill!

I doubt this is the last we've seen of James though...
4/13 c5 Paladin777
Hmm... a disease that only effects genomes is certainly a very interesting and creative idea! It's also curious that Elsie seems to have a soul... the plot thickens...

One minor criticism though: it's always raining in Burmecia so it's be hard to see the sun while there.
4/12 c4 Paladin777
Hmm, I never figured Garland to be a sadist. Anyway, it seems like Zidane could use a little encouragement from his favorite summoner/white mage, just like the last time Garland tried to have his way!

In any case, I'm curious with where you take this!
4/6 c2 Paladin777
This seems like it could be pretty exciting! Since you’ve got Zidane here, I can’t help wondering what Garnet’s role will be! That is, assuming this holds to in-game canon.

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