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12m c49 1lolistarkiller
Honestly I think they didn’t use the grandparents, because Saint Elara didn’t want to have even more adults be able to tell her what to do. But I love the relationship between Rebekah and Ellie! I hope that when they dagger Rebekah, that Ellie immediately goes and un daggers her. She is clearly noticing Elana’s tendency to only want to be beholden to herself, which to Ellie means Elena is refusing to see the bigger picture and isn’t thinking through all the info she is given. Meaning Elena is putting their family and friends in danger and unleashing things she doesn’t understand onto them. To me this makes Elena way worse than Katherine, because at least Katherine doesn’t just jump on a solution without really thinking it through (most times) if Katherine knew how insane Mikael was and how much he could cause HER harm I doubt she would have told Damon about Mikael. I honestly like the fact that Ellie is willing to actually form her own opinions and is not willing to just follow Elana’s plans. This is honestly why I believe Elena isn’t involving Ellie in her plans. But I cannot wait for your next update!
2h c49 Oz
You're just spoiling us at this point and I don't mind at all!

Elena needs to get over herself. Once again she blows Ellie off and doesn't include her in anything. She didn't learn her lesson the first time. I'm not even surprised Isobel didn't even go to see Elena.

I love the Ellie-Rebekah bonding. I could see Caroline getting into the mix(; Rebekah is a meaner version of Caroline and I feel they could get along. I'm glad Jeremy didn't judge Ellie for hanging out with Rebekah. I never thought I would see Rebekah playing video games, that would be Kol's thing, lol! Ooh! Ellie, Rebekah, Jeremy and Kol playing Fall Guys! I would love that, LOL! I could see Kol getting frustrated! Even Ellie, Katherine, Rebekah, Caroline and maybe Bonnie going on a shopping spree...

I hope Ellie protects Rebekah from Elena. Elena was such a backstabbing b*tch in that scene. Why would you pretend to be her friend, care for her and let her in on the plan if you were just going to dagger her anyway? Now if Elena hadn't gotten close to her and Rebekah overheard their plan to kill Klaus, then I would have understood daggering her. It was such bs.

And I'm still bitter about the fact towards Elena and Alaric still allow Damon around but don't even consider Jeremy's feelings. Damon threatened Jeremy multiple times and killed him. Does anyone think Jeremy actually wants Damon around? So when is Jenna going to get involved and have her say? "This is my house. I'm the adult in charge. I'm the guardian. I have the control."
11h c49 flawsome4ever
the chapter was amazing
I love the bonding between them.
I am very excited about what changes you are gonna do.
thank you for updating.
have a nice day.
16h c49 brigitm28
Yay more Ellie and Bekah bonding, I know I'm going to enjoy their friendship when they get to that point. Honestly Elena never learns her lesson when it comes to telling people the truth, like you don't get to decide what people are allowed to know and if someone doesn't want to know all the details deal with it after telling them so they can decide. Also why didn't the Mystic Falls gang never understand that the Mikaelsons have been around for a very long time and that if there is a threat that even they are scared of that they should leave it alone, like Silas, killing the hunter, Mikael and probably many more. Like the Salvatores don't know anything, they didn't even know that werewolves were real. It just annoys me. I really hated the way Elena acted this episode but I'm glad Ellie was there to comfort Rebekah. Well for one shots definitely Bekah and Ellie watching romcoms, maybe some moments with Caroline and Jenna that take place before the series oh and some Mikaelson and Ellie moments would be fun... Sorry I got a little excited.
18h c49 xenocanaan
Finally! Ellie used magic on Elena, even if it was to push her out the door! I am so happy, words cannot express! I’ve been hoping she’d do that since day one! Honestly, still hoping Ellie kills Damon at some point, sooner the better before his stupid ideas get more people in danger. Thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter and I can’t wait to read more!
20h c48 AdiraBraelynn
This chapter was amazing. An emotional rollercoaster from the start to finish. I cried. I actually needed a break lol. You write beautifully and I thank you for bringing in this wonderful story.
It's kinda funny that you made her character complement Kol and it just turned into an Elijah pairing lol. The Mikaelsons really need some stable love and relationship. Honestly they got screwed up so many times it hurts.

I'm so glad Ellie got a reunion scene with Jeremy in this chapter! And her being so understanding and thoughtful for every party involved is so Ellie. I'll be honest apart from being a doctor/nurse I think she might've been a good diplomat too.
Have I mentioned I love Jenna and Ellie's relationship? Let me do so again. They're so open and honest with each other, they care enough to check in and know when to give space. They're awesome. I kinda wish I had an aunt like that ngl

I can't describe how it feels to see Elie finally get closure with Luka, Dr Martin, Sheila and Isobel. Especially Isobel. She didn't get much time with her birth mother, I think that's really sad and I'm glad she got some time with her. Ellie's crying and apologies to Luka and Dr Martin really broke my heart. She really cared for them and it must've been a terrible shock to see them dead. And she's been holding in her breakdown for a while now. It feels good to see her let go. Several times. Lord knows that girl needs a break from all this mess.

The kiss is 10 chapters away!? Around 2 - 3 months from now then! I'm so excited! Can't wait for more Originals scenes. They're awesome ~
Yeah I feel you. It's so funny that many people complain about their paranoia and colder character and then just turn around and stab them in the back. Like wtf you brought it on yourself.

If you've got time to write several one shots of scenes that were not able to make the cut, go for it! I would love to see the gang's reaction to Elena leaving Ellie behind
I can't wait to see what happens next!

Amazing chapter as always :D
21h c48 Oz
Not just Ellie needed this, we all did. Thank you for that. Because you did hint bringing Luka and his dad back but not only that, you brought Isobel, Shelia and Emily back as well! I was not expecting that!

The moment with Isoble, Ellie really needed that and she never got it all because of Elena. Also Isobel hinting the sisterhood with Katherine? I'm here for it.

Grams and Emily, they're still teaching Ellie and I love it. They also know Ellie is the smart one. So hopefully Bonnie will listen to her and not Elena. I'm guessing Kol will become her new mentor?

Luka and his dad stuck around to make sure Ellie will be alright? I was feeling emotional at that part. Ellie had such a beautiful bond with them.

I'm also surprised by Stefan and wouldn't mind more of it. Now while his humanity is off, he kinda has shown to still care for Ellie.
1/2 c48 lolistarkiller
Okay I loved this chapter! It definitely helped Ellie cope! Also now you’ve brought isobel’s parents up...I totally think they should bump into each other at Isobel’s grave and Ellie tell them she’s they’re granddaughter! It’ll give her an outlet, a place where she can just be a teen/granddaughter for a little while! And I definitely think it would do the family good as a whole to have some kind grandparents to help out with the non supernatural parts of their lives! Can’t wait for your next update!
1/1 c48 flawsome4ever
this chapter was beautifully written.
she really needed the closer.
i can't wait till she meet other original siblings.
she really needs new friends.
i hope she can help finn as well.
thank you so much for updating.
happy new year.
1/1 c48 brigitm28
Ellie feeling guilty about not being there for Jeremy just warms and breaks my heart, sometimes I get worried about all the pressure she puts on herself to save everyone. She's just so kind hearted and I love it. I liked her interpretation of the Anna situation because that's kinda the way I saw it and while Anna is not a character I like a whole lot I did feel for her. Jeremy getting magicked off the bed is an example of what I would do if I had magic haha. Also she got to reunite with the Martins and Isobel as well as the Bennett witches for some time so she got some closure which is good for her and maybe she will start opening up more. More Stefan and Ellie definitely and I like that one shot idea because there are many scenarios I would love to see.
1/1 c48 1FreakingLEM
I cried when they came to Ellie. She needed that closure so bad.
1/1 c48 xenocanaan
I am looking forward to the confrontation between her and Elena. Honestly, I hope it’s a big explosion and Elena (along with everyone going along with her stupid ass) gets knocked down more than a few pegs. That said, I’m so glad she got to get some sort of closure with the people that meant so much to her. Perfect way to start off the new year. I do hope to see more of her and Stefan, I feel like there is something far more genuine to their relationship than what Stefan has to most of the other chacters, at least at this point. I think that is proven by him squeezing her hand, he didn’t do anything to prove something to Elena throughout that time, but he does something that has been minuscule yet highly significant between them during their isolation. That makes it pretty profound in my opinion. Was glad she had some family time with Jeremy and Jenna, honestly the only two people I’m really fond of. Even Caroline and Bonnie come across as wishy washy at best between Ellie and Elena. Maybe that will change, but I’m not so sure. Thank you for sharing another phenomenal chapter! I can’t wait to read more!
1/1 c48 vivi.wie
This chapter hit me hard! It was so wonderful to read and really, really sad and emotional! I loved every second of Ellie getting her closure, like oh my god I had tears in my eyes! I did not remember, that Jeremy could see ghosts and now I'm thinking about what else there was, but it's all kind of a blurr.
Am I the only one, that reads all the other comments and your answers? I get so much more information that way lol, sorry! No really, your readers are amazing with all their ideas and perspectives :-)
1/1 c47 AdiraBraelynn
First of all, happy new year! Secondly, awesome chapter! I bawled when Jenna and Ellie finally reunited omg the feels! It was everything I wished for and more. Was kinda hoping to see Jeremy after Ellie found out he died AGAIN. Like she would be so anxious and worried over him. Omg her reunion with Care too! I just loved them. And the way you wrote Ellie's character, she just feels things so passionately, and she's so loyal, caring and dedicated to those she loves and cared about. I think her character really complements Elijah well, and I'm glad to see a healthy relationship develop. Sadly it's rather rare on fanfiction for some reason.

I really enjoyed seeing Rebekah interact with someone who isn't planning to dagger her. The Originals as a whole keep getting daggered ugh. And Ellie is so nice and genuine it is quite startling to see Elena's actions in comparison. I'm so excited to see their progression! Do you have a movie scene with Ellie, Care and Bekah? Cause that'll be so good. And Rebekah is a smart girl, she'll figure out which doppelganger is the nice one and keep closer to annoy the more selfish one.

And of course, the gang keeps her out. As usual -_-
Is it possible for a request to see Ellie smack down Damon's bs at one point once more? Like honey, you may act tough but I interact with Originals on a daily basis. You're a baby vampie. You're gonna have to step up your game.
At this point, hasn't Damon done more damage than Klaus himself? Huh. Ellie should bring up that point. Wonder what it says about Elena blaming everything on Kat and Klaus.

Stefan :( the last sentence in the end gave me so much hope it was a whiplash from the emotion filled ride of this chapter. But it was a good kind of whiplash. The kind where you see a glimpse of light in the darkness and rush out. I know this is spoiler territory but I need to get these questions off my chest before I combust. You don't have to answer. I know it's not exactly answerable.
Will Stefan break out of Ripper mode sooner? How soon are we talking for kissing territory between Ellie and Elijah? Will Ellie be there for the dinner scene *gasp*!? Please tell me she insults Damon at least once. I can't wait for her to meet the family! She'll fit right in with the sass and family loyalty. Will the breaking of the link to kill the Originals due to Esther hopefully play out differently? I really wanted to see the possible dynamics of Bonnie and Abby as she deals with a mother who left her for the safety of Elena and the town. There is so much potential there. And it could well change some parts of the story. If you've already written this part and can't change it, I apologise. I do love imagining possible scenarios.
And finally, which ship did you prefer for Klaus - Cami or Caroline?

More Kol and Kat scenes! You are too good to us. The tension between Elijah and Ellie is killing all of us. I am so eager to finally see them reunite and slowly start up a relationship. My heart melted just thinking of that lol.
I'll be honest I don't really remember what happens in detail between arrival at MF and the ball. Everything's a blur oof. So I'll probably get surprised by things that were already known.

Beautiful writing as always! I must have binge read this lovely story so many times now, and I enjoy it every single time. Wishing you a good year this 2021, or at least better than last year.
12/30/2020 c47 Oz
Did you do a double udpate?! Happy Holidays by the way!

Okay, I want to talk about Ric first... I honestly want Jenna to dump him because this is not it. He's suppose to be an adult. He suppose to be their step-father but not once has he acted like it. He always let's Elena make the decisions and allows her to get away with her bs. He also continues to allow Damon around knowing the bs he has pulled. It's getting ridiculous and I'm so over Ric. Jenna can do better... Are they still together?

Maybe you're changing my mind about Stefan but this wouldn't be the first time. He was one of the characters I couldn't stand because he was such a hypocrite, later seasons it was so back and forth. I would start to care for him or just not like him. The only times I would really find him likable is fanficiton. Could he slowly be coming over to Team Ellie? If he were to actually choose the oc over Elena, which is rare to happen, I would love to see that.

Thank you for reminding of how much I adored Tyler and Ellie's relationship. I forgotten all about it, it's been so long! I hope he doesn't become a dumb*** and douche. Just break the sirebond, be free and live his life.

Ellie is going to be Elena in her place about Rebekah. She can't be saying sh*t about Klaus or Rebekah considering the Salvatores (or at least Damon) have done more to their family and friends. Plus Jenna lived thanks to Ellie, so why continue the drama Elena? Move on with your life and stop creating problems.

I need more of the Callie brotp! Just waiting for Klaroline, Ellie playing matchmaker(; Sorry Ty!

F**k Elena. F**k Damon. F**k Alaric. I'm so tired of them.

This was a long review but I can't wait to see what other plot twists you give!
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