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7/4 c5 Nicketje02
Noice
7/3 c2 Nicketje02
Noice 3
7/3 c1 Nicketje02
Noice
5/29 c5 leoncharizard39
When is the next Update?
Btw. up to this point it is a really good story
3/27 c5 2Xenowishes
It's good to see you back after so long. The writing has improved since the last time I visited this story, giving more focus on the other characters so it isn't a one-man show. You're setting more players to enter on the ally and enemy side.

I liked how Tatenashi made up for her actions, even without the apology. And Chifuyu having another friend is a nice touch. Even seeing the IS gang just hang out and chat feels refreshing. If you have too many characters in a scene some can just stay silent or answer with an action to break up the talking.

One the scenes with other characters some felt good whiles others just seemed weird. Like wen Tyler recruited Arlindo it said he was a high ranking member of PT yet based on his story it looks like he was recruited for a single job. Or how Katsuragi acts in a way that's practically asking to be fired. Does she not know who Chifuyu is? I think you're going for the conservative outlook which if you are you're doing a good job of that.

Kind of a bit of a stretch to assume to Nick was kidnapped just cause he didn't show to the party. At worst with no evidence it'd be more reasonable to think he didn't want to come. It wasn't bad, just a questionable leap in logic.

The writing has gotten more diverse with more people being brought in. The jokes were good to, most of them revolving about Rin and Nick's sleeping habits, specifically the bad ones. I'll be waiting to read the next one.
3/25 c5 3franciskanneh007
What the heck? This needs to be explained in the next chapter to make sense.
3/22 c5 Guest
Genshirou Nozomori X Chifuyu Orimura
3/22 c5 Guest
Once again, another great chapter for this amazing IS fanfiction that I really enjoyed reading. Like I said before, each chapter the story is gradually getting more and more interesting. The comedy here continues to be top-notch and the characters' personalities, dialogues, and relationships are all genius. And that ending there, oh man! I bet Houki, Charlotte, Rin, Laura, and Cecilia (of course) are going to give Nick a piece of their minds regarding Natalia. I'm well-aware that Nick is mainly interested in Cecilia, but the future is not set in stone so we'll just have to wait and see on who Nick will end up with (either her, Houki, Charlotte, Rin, or Laura). :) See you back in 2-3 (or more) months!

P.S. I'm very happy that you gave Chifuyu Orimura an adult male that serves as a friend and (hopefully) a love interest for her. Although I know for a fact that Chifuyu being a part of Ichika's harem is suppose to be a joke in the canon anime/manga/light novel, I still feel pretty sorry for her that she doesn't have a man to experience any feelings of romance with. :D Here is hoping that those two will end up together!
3/22 c5 Kyred
Nick trying to stop a train wreck...good sir that ain’t happening. On another note, didn’t Laura call Ichika husband as well. Great chapter, can’t wait for the next one.
1/21 c4 Guest
: ) Great Job! Please update soon as I can tell from each chapter that this story is getting better!
5/29/2020 c3 Grimraven.V
I love this keep it up
3/31/2020 c3 2Xenowishes
It's a nice fanfic that seems to be starting at the beginning of season two. My biggest complaint is that everything seems to be about your OC Wolf. Every scene features him and characters only talk about things that include him. Don't forget to focus on the other characters in the story and their scenes.
2/24/2020 c1 Guest
"[...] with all the times they yell at me and get mad at me and hit me, sometimes I'm not even sure they like me as a friend".
He is not wrong, though...

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