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11/30/2020 c15 7cheshirecat9116
* slow clap* I’m- breathless? The children ? ? That was so brutal?! (You had no right leading in with something so wholesome and cute) only to have it literally go up in my face. Oh man where to start, I think this chapter has the best use of powers i’ve ever seen. Like everything is really clever , i can see what course of action would influence what. See , i always wondered how people would attack the X mansion if u had powerful telepaths who could sense u from a mile away. I mean Jean and Raven both having migraines / headaches. i see what u did there. Kara’s action scene is giving me some serious callbacks to someone... i wonder who. But Rahne and Raven. true MVP’s esp Rahne, that attack on Kara was esp brutal and it’s nice to see the pay off that was her coming to save her friend. Kara’s last words were haunting tho. gutted me. Next chapter soon pls, i need to know how this resolves
11/24/2020 c14 FeralHyena
Hi, i love this story. It is the best!
Please update soon, this story is the best!
I dont hve any advice that could improve this story because
its already the best!
Have a happy christmas and new year
-FeralHyena
11/21/2020 c14 cheshirecat9116
awww... d’awwww Kara can train with her friends. Dad Logan is best Logan~ ( also thank u Piotr) and that final campfire scene... just awwww like what can I say about it ? It’s nice to see Kara finally being comfortable with everyone and Raven being comfortable with her. And the Rahne cameo was *so adorable. *SO WHY DID U HAVE TO END IT LIKE THAT? New chapter soon right ?
11/4/2020 c2 chimera629
He definitely need stop bring up widows action and investigate
10/15/2020 c13 cheshirecat9116
So i did this thing... where i went back to chapter 1 and re read everything till i caught up and - deep contented sigh- . It’s nice to see all the seperate plot threads, start to come together. Glad to see Rahne again, and with all that build up regarding Kara and Creed’s relationship. It must be really really bad... that “why did it have to hurt l” line was haunting and i really really want to know what went down. Also aww Kara DIY uniform ( but pls tell me she gets to train with her friends? maybe ?) Also, hmmm geee i wonder what’s got Logan so worried at the end.. excited for the next chapter

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9/3/2020 c12 cheshirecat9116
big brain moment for me, enjoyed reading it so much that i kinda forgot to review. my bad. So happy that i requested for Kara and this one was such a wholesome Kara episode. Glad that I get to see more personal relationships between her and the other x kids. The one with Kurt is especially d’aww ( do we get more of them? do we get them dressed as pirates? ) i need to know.
7/7/2020 c11 cheshirecat9116
i love how when uncle Logan gets back, everything goes chaotic for a hot sec but he somehow manages to put everything back together. we love uncle logan. Ahh i like the character work in this chapter , like even though most of the characters here are young, you really make them not just kids, but kids with complex inner lives. stellar examples would be Raven and Kitty . Like both are guilty and both are trying to do the right thing but just through the dialogue i can tell the nuance of how their personality and age affects how they are trying to “deal “‘with kara. Speaking of Kara , i don’t know how you do this thing, again where she’s not just a kid, but a feral kid and despite her logic being obviously different from us, it still makes100% sense , I don’t question the authenticity of it. Yeah big fan, solid chapter. great character work. More of This, more of uncle logan and kara and pls more of jason and remy ( jubes should be part of the gang, like fireworks would just add to the mayhem)
5/22/2020 c10 cew1088
So glad you updated. The story is getting very interesting. Please update soon
5/22/2020 c10 LoveKitaSoMuch
Yayyyyyyyyyyyy Logan is back!
5/22/2020 c10 cheshirecat9116
So...you weren’t kidding about the length. and it’s ok all is forgiven because WOW this chapter. It’s nice to have another Kara centred chapter again and one that focuses on how she feels ... and i just love how you write her. Like i can see where she’s coming from like as a kid but it’s also different enough for me to believe she’s a feral. Also the seeds planted in this chapter. I love your interpretation of Rahne, i always felt like the comics never used her that well and here you are. The relationship between her and Kara just makes so much sense (and it’s adorable ) Side characters are great too. Tabitha is the perfect mean girl and Jason is a joy as always. i just feel so bad about Kitty and Rogue tho. the painful thing is I get where they are coming from and that also hurts because Kara so obviously in need of friends and they want to be her friends, it’s just hard trying to cover up fear from a feral. Ugh solid solid chapter. Dying to see uncle logan’s pep talk
5/7/2020 c9 cheshirecat9116
I KNEW IT . ok that final part with kitty and rogue... where Kara smashes the table. like i said, Creed’s part of her backstory isn’t he... or else i don’t see why she would have such a visceral reaction to him being mentioned, or is it cuz she’s just so mad at Scott. I love how Kara’s being portrayed here. Like not angry but ... something different like this experience hollowed her from the inside. It’s refreshing. (also love how u caught the whole accuracy of kids being mean without knowing they’re being mean ) Raven calling them out was *chef kisses * more soon?
4/29/2020 c8 LoveKitaSoMuch
Oh noooooo! Wait so Kara is an assassin like Natasha but mutant? And her senses are automatically tuned to her enemies? Thats why she won’t stop fighting?
4/29/2020 c8 cheshirecat9116
You... you just had me convinced Kara was happily settled in the mansion and now... First of those bullies deserved it, second of all, god damn it scott. ( you just had to get involved ) Pretty sure uncle logan’s going to give him hell for this. Ok apart from that, love the action scenes u write, love them. Quality stuff. that last part with creed tho... like i know Creed is a sicko but how Kara reacted in relation to him... that felt personal... are we getting... backstory ? soon ? yes ?
4/22/2020 c7 cheshirecat9116
So he’s back, and wow what a way to pick up where we left off . We love a concerned uncle logan doing his best to help Kara, even if it’s in a very behind the scenes kind of way. kjax, how do u write a scene where there’s like great dialogue and tension but also hilarious ( enough c4 to level the place...) Also that’s a very interesting way to use Raven’s empathy powers. I always felt like in the comic they either never use it or that it was more of a crutch then a gift, so kudos to u for making it such a key part of her character. ( and in character too) Also, Kara? Mother ? Parents ? You’re killing me with the suspense. And apocalypse? based on the previous chapter, is apocalypse... like this version’s trigon? Missing Kara, hope she appears more in the next chapter... which is soon? yes ?
4/20/2020 c6 LoveKitaSoMuch
Oooooooooo. That was deep. So Kara is psychic? Or she contains some kind of energy?
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