10/29/2020 c18 25Alley McNally
Interesting chapter. I'm glad that Clark is changing his views. It feels a little inorganic but I think that is the feel of the entire piece. That may not actually be an issue. It's kind of a messed up world.
I do have a question though: How old is Jon here? Time is kind of fluid and I don't know how old he is. Depending on his age what he said can make sense. It just all depends on the age.
Good work!
Interesting chapter. I'm glad that Clark is changing his views. It feels a little inorganic but I think that is the feel of the entire piece. That may not actually be an issue. It's kind of a messed up world.
I do have a question though: How old is Jon here? Time is kind of fluid and I don't know how old he is. Depending on his age what he said can make sense. It just all depends on the age.
Good work!
7/25/2020 c10 Guest
Instead of becoming a government Superthug, Kal should have taken the entire JL and their families and relocated to Oa, I guess. Well, Arthur and Diana do have separate homelands but how long will that protect them? The entire GL Corps could avoid Earth but the human GLs might want to surrender their rings to the Guardians. Will this story ever be finished?
Instead of becoming a government Superthug, Kal should have taken the entire JL and their families and relocated to Oa, I guess. Well, Arthur and Diana do have separate homelands but how long will that protect them? The entire GL Corps could avoid Earth but the human GLs might want to surrender their rings to the Guardians. Will this story ever be finished?
6/29/2020 c10 25Alley McNally
Interesting story. I'm not quite sure where you're going with this, but I am curious to see what happens. Good work and I hope to see how the chapter soon.
Interesting story. I'm not quite sure where you're going with this, but I am curious to see what happens. Good work and I hope to see how the chapter soon.
4/6/2020 c3 Guest
Can't wait for more...love the inner conflict he is having!
Can't wait for more...love the inner conflict he is having!
2/19/2020 c1 Shieldmaidenofrohan6
Is this a one shot or will it be developed into a full story? I love the set up!
Is this a one shot or will it be developed into a full story? I love the set up!