4/5/2020 c24 Sethybones
Great read. I really enjoyed the clippings from the journals books and news papers it really added depth to your world building.
Though I wish the beginning didn't rush so quickly I also get that's how 16 year olds are. And I think the story was really well thought out in both plot and the sciences.
Great read. I really enjoyed the clippings from the journals books and news papers it really added depth to your world building.
Though I wish the beginning didn't rush so quickly I also get that's how 16 year olds are. And I think the story was really well thought out in both plot and the sciences.
4/2/2020 c1 1Hermos
Ahhhhhh that was incredible job! i can't say that i expected anything to happen; you amazes me with the story plot and everything you wrote! :D
Ahhhhhh that was incredible job! i can't say that i expected anything to happen; you amazes me with the story plot and everything you wrote! :D
3/15/2020 c24 2talyak
Hehe perfect ending to a great story. Corona has us all on lockdown so more to read!
* i am already a remote employee and usually have a 4yr old home at all times, now the 5yr old is joining... crazyness!
Hehe perfect ending to a great story. Corona has us all on lockdown so more to read!
* i am already a remote employee and usually have a 4yr old home at all times, now the 5yr old is joining... crazyness!
3/15/2020 c23 Mira
Interesting stuff going on. Kaiba needs to drink some chamomile tea. And do some yoga, the guy sounds awfully high strung. (it would probably temper that testosterone too.)
Interesting stuff going on. Kaiba needs to drink some chamomile tea. And do some yoga, the guy sounds awfully high strung. (it would probably temper that testosterone too.)
3/14/2020 c17 Mira
Hello, thank you for answering my question. And also thank you for updating.
So far, wondering why Kaiba won't talk to Jounouchi to get things straightened out (since I think that will fix alot of stuff.), but then again, it IS Kaiba. I look forward to your next post.
Hello, thank you for answering my question. And also thank you for updating.
So far, wondering why Kaiba won't talk to Jounouchi to get things straightened out (since I think that will fix alot of stuff.), but then again, it IS Kaiba. I look forward to your next post.
3/14/2020 c17 talyak
Wait so is kaiba not the father? Or did he doctir results? Now i am confused although might just be my addled brain.
Wait so is kaiba not the father? Or did he doctir results? Now i am confused although might just be my addled brain.