12/8 c11 7RedHood001
I actually love how everything went down. Mushu basically spoke for all of us who wanted there to be less bloodshed. I can't say I disagree with Mulan's reply to his words but I also couldn't help but imagine a more peaceful transition. I actually like how she actually wants to spare some of the soldiers.
Your inclusion of Mushu and Cricket works really well here. I especially love how well the former takes to Mulan's views, even with his hesitations. I also love how carefree Mulan is acting now that she's back with the Huns, particularly her old friends.
Very well done!
I actually love how everything went down. Mushu basically spoke for all of us who wanted there to be less bloodshed. I can't say I disagree with Mulan's reply to his words but I also couldn't help but imagine a more peaceful transition. I actually like how she actually wants to spare some of the soldiers.
Your inclusion of Mushu and Cricket works really well here. I especially love how well the former takes to Mulan's views, even with his hesitations. I also love how carefree Mulan is acting now that she's back with the Huns, particularly her old friends.
Very well done!
12/8 c11 3Skyfire511
Yessssss. I swear: stories try to write themselves. Authors are simply the vessels for them to do so. Love the chapter!
Yessssss. I swear: stories try to write themselves. Authors are simply the vessels for them to do so. Love the chapter!
12/8 c11 liziliza
Mulan é uma mulher que fala o que pensa.
Adoro isso nela.
Estou ansiosa para ver o que acontece quando os Hunos invadirem a China.
Mulan é uma mulher que fala o que pensa.
Adoro isso nela.
Estou ansiosa para ver o que acontece quando os Hunos invadirem a China.
12/8 c11 1abigail-blindtale
Hello I loved the chapter because on the contrary to see if this is going to work and I am glad that Mulan and Shan Yu saw you again I hope to wait for another chapter to see what happens.
Hello I loved the chapter because on the contrary to see if this is going to work and I am glad that Mulan and Shan Yu saw you again I hope to wait for another chapter to see what happens.
12/7 c11 tonya
oh i can't wait to see what happens next! i read all this story in one go & I love it! please update again soon
oh i can't wait to see what happens next! i read all this story in one go & I love it! please update again soon
12/7 c11 Guest
Soooo where exactly is Chi Fu after being in the last chapter with the village? He should be with them and as a prisoner too being the one spitting hate at Mulan...don't tell he got away and gets no karma or comeuppance for being an ass.
Soooo where exactly is Chi Fu after being in the last chapter with the village? He should be with them and as a prisoner too being the one spitting hate at Mulan...don't tell he got away and gets no karma or comeuppance for being an ass.
12/7 c11 angela6x6
Divine and very interesting chapter. Mulan's reunion with Shan-Yu was interesting. Do you know when you will give the next chapter. I love your story more and more.
Divine and very interesting chapter. Mulan's reunion with Shan-Yu was interesting. Do you know when you will give the next chapter. I love your story more and more.
12/7 c11 1WispyNauticalPhoenix
Yay, this chapter was awesome! Can't wait to see more Mulan and Shan-Yu!
Yay, this chapter was awesome! Can't wait to see more Mulan and Shan-Yu!