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12/14 c11 1Shadow Wolf 15846
interesting!
12/8 c11 7RedHood001
I actually love how everything went down. Mushu basically spoke for all of us who wanted there to be less bloodshed. I can't say I disagree with Mulan's reply to his words but I also couldn't help but imagine a more peaceful transition. I actually like how she actually wants to spare some of the soldiers.

Your inclusion of Mushu and Cricket works really well here. I especially love how well the former takes to Mulan's views, even with his hesitations. I also love how carefree Mulan is acting now that she's back with the Huns, particularly her old friends.

Very well done!
12/8 c11 3Skyfire511
Yessssss. I swear: stories try to write themselves. Authors are simply the vessels for them to do so. Love the chapter!
12/8 c11 liziliza
Mulan é uma mulher que fala o que pensa.
Adoro isso nela.
Estou ansiosa para ver o que acontece quando os Hunos invadirem a China.
12/8 c11 1abigail-blindtale
Hello I loved the chapter because on the contrary to see if this is going to work and I am glad that Mulan and Shan Yu saw you again I hope to wait for another chapter to see what happens.
12/8 c11 ladyamy26072003
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12/7 c11 tonya
oh i can't wait to see what happens next! i read all this story in one go & I love it! please update again soon
12/7 c11 Guest
Soooo where exactly is Chi Fu after being in the last chapter with the village? He should be with them and as a prisoner too being the one spitting hate at Mulan...don't tell he got away and gets no karma or comeuppance for being an ass.
12/7 c11 angela6x6
Divine and very interesting chapter. Mulan's reunion with Shan-Yu was interesting. Do you know when you will give the next chapter. I love your story more and more.
12/7 c11 1WispyNauticalPhoenix
Yay, this chapter was awesome! Can't wait to see more Mulan and Shan-Yu!
12/7 c11 29MysticalKC
I love it! :)
12/7 c11 11XxTaintedxDaggerxX
Oh snap! Can’t wait to read what happens next!
12/7 c11 1Potato-Ladyyy
ooh the big moment has come! that was an exciting read :)
12/7 c11 4DRMAK
No disappointment to be found hear. You did well. A lot of ways this could have gone. This one was a pretty good way for it to go.
12/4 c10 6thegoldensnitch102
Enjoying this take :)
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