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5/20 c1 Guest
The foreshadowing in that last sentence is just *chef's kiss* the tone of the chapter is nice too because Chihiro's life seems fairly normal and her relationship with her parents is a breath of fresh air compared to other spirited away fanfictions
4/10 c3 2Slyvestra
This was amazing oh my gosh— During the last chapter the tension was so beautifully written! Please, if you have the time continue this. It’s a masterpiece!
3/25 c3 49ArtisteFish
I was so sad to get to the end of the chapter because I LOVE THIS! Omigosh, not only an interesting fic, but an amazingly written story! Can’t wait to see what’s next! :D
11/15/2020 c2 Loyluma
I know writers have their own life and problems, and I can wait for ur history even if it take a year or more, but pleaseeee, don't abandon it. I'm really in love with it, is the third time I found a immersive fanfic :'(
And don't be sad if is because of few the reviews, there's still ppl loving your work.
10/24/2020 c3 4Kittystar77
Ajdhejfhsb I am both intrigued and slightly terrified, I'm loving it so far <3 <3 <3
7/29/2020 c3 Croonable
Very interesting.
Thank you for the chapter.
6/25/2020 c3 Loyluma
Hey, the way you write is absolutely fresh and creative, you made me feel the rain, wind and the wounds in my skin. I love the way you portrayed the reunion of Chihiro and Haku. It's original and more realistic in my opinion.
I'm so anxious to read more of this story and you in the near future.

Have a nice day, dear writter.
6/19/2020 c3 Guest
So he remembers her, but she doesn’t remember him...
6/19/2020 c3 Era
So he remembers her, but she doesn’t remember him... this is going to be interesting.
6/19/2020 c1 Guest
Wow, this is really interesting. I can’t wait to read more. And your writing is very good, it draws the reader in.
6/18/2020 c3 James Birdsong
Good chapter
5/16/2020 c2 Guest
This is so good! Keep it up xx
5/7/2020 c2 James Birdsong
Good two chapters
5/5/2020 c2 3DHersheyPlus
Very well done! I thought the pacing was perfect. I’m glad you didn’t split the chapter in two; if you had it would have felt stilted and odd. You’ve constructed a compelling narrative and I eagerly await your next update! I can’t wait to see what happens next!
5/5/2020 c2 5light soceress
jafjjdjsdkjd I love how you depict Chihiro relationship with her parents. It so very warm 3 All the character feel like real people. Im curious to see where you take this. Poor Chihiro and Poor Kenji.
a note I think you needed a page break at the start of the festival scene, the jump was a bit disorienting. but you pacing is good so far ovo b
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