4/13 c5 NoilyPrat
It's been an interesting ride. Good fleshed out characters, wonderful storyline. Look forward to Nik at full strength and Cal stepping down as older brother.
REALLY enjoyed description of how much detailed cleaning Cal did!
It's been an interesting ride. Good fleshed out characters, wonderful storyline. Look forward to Nik at full strength and Cal stepping down as older brother.
REALLY enjoyed description of how much detailed cleaning Cal did!
4/13 c5 LauraJ42
The irony about the time of posting is pretty amusing.
Thanks again for sharing! Looking forward to the last chapter!
The irony about the time of posting is pretty amusing.
Thanks again for sharing! Looking forward to the last chapter!
4/6 c4 NoilyPrat
Enjoying reading about the brothers fighting the poison in Nik's body.
(You have a continuity for the middle of the night, which it needs to be early morning, if the quarter to four comment earlier happened first)
Enjoying reading about the brothers fighting the poison in Nik's body.
(You have a continuity for the middle of the night, which it needs to be early morning, if the quarter to four comment earlier happened first)
3/31 c3 NoilyPrat
I hadn't realized that Cal wasn't sick. I thought he'd been feeling poorly earlier, but I guess I was wrong?
Liked the burnt toast and ketchup and mustard sandwich. And having a teen clean? WHOA! End of the world stuff. Interesting artwork on his wall. Also interesting is the fact that lying to Nik happened.
I hadn't realized that Cal wasn't sick. I thought he'd been feeling poorly earlier, but I guess I was wrong?
Liked the burnt toast and ketchup and mustard sandwich. And having a teen clean? WHOA! End of the world stuff. Interesting artwork on his wall. Also interesting is the fact that lying to Nik happened.
3/30 c3 LauraJ42
I’ve been waiting! Lockdown has me more impatient for updates. Again, love your writing!
I’ve been waiting! Lockdown has me more impatient for updates. Again, love your writing!
3/23 c2 scootersmom
I enjoyed this very much although I am still trying to figure out the basics about each brother, at least I think they are brothers. Where did you hear about them? Were they on a show long ago? never heard of them before.
I enjoyed this very much although I am still trying to figure out the basics about each brother, at least I think they are brothers. Where did you hear about them? Were they on a show long ago? never heard of them before.