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1/4 c5 Unknown
I hope you include Ellis!
1/4 c3 CAT ATTACK
CAT ATTACK!
1/4 c22 Unknown
PLEASE UPDATE!
12/18/2020 c21 Roseknight
I know earlier I said that I thought everything was slowed down. Well...I spoke too soon. It's a long story but not something I want to bring up. But I do want to assure you that it's all sorted out, hopefully this time it is for good. -knocks on wood-

So what I can say in this chapter, it got really crazy towards the end, didn't it? With them finding out that there's another dark mage terrorizing and manipulating the townsfork, I feel really scared and bad for them. (And from that evil witch's incarnation when she was draining the energy, I instantly got a sense that it was inspired by one of Tangled's song. I'm no fan of it, sorry to say, but my sister does love the movie and regardless, I still love Disney, I'm just not the fan of this version of Rapunzel, I liked the Barbie's version a bit more to be honest.)

Overall, I do liked how the group was bonding over Callum's drawings and at the part when Claudia was holding Rayla's father's heart (well in the box anyway). It felt like he knew she was having trouble sleeping and wanted to help her. Sometimes I wish his spirit could enter in her dreams and give her some words of advice. Unless Claudia does something about it on her own, we'll see.

That's all I gotta say cause again, I'm trying to keep my words as small as possible to avoid spoilers for reviewers to read. Or there's some that I might've. Oh no. X_X Ah it'll be fine. And now I'm talking to myself. lol Anyway Maggies, in case if I don't see you or the chapter next week which it's understandable, it's Christmas and we should spend time with families, I shall see you and everyone else here in reviews in 2021! Let's pray that it'll be a better year than 2020 cause let's face it, it hasn't been good. XD So take care, be safe, see ya later, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
12/19/2020 c22 19FableTheWolf7
You take all the time you need. I've been writing for years and pro-tip; you should never force yourself when you don't feel like it. If you do, it'll usually show in the work anyway. Keeping away from the project for a while prevents burn-out, something you NEVER want. Good luck.
12/19/2020 c22 8Radu24maior
Hey, I understand how you feel. You don’t have to rush finishing the story, I can wait. But I do have to say this, I love the story, but I understand, when you don’t feel like writing you don’t. Trust me I’ve been there. I’m just hoping that you will finish this story at some point, I have seen a lot of good stories left unfinished, I really hoped this will not be one of them.
12/19/2020 c22 8Wildgirl6
I’m so sorry that things haven’t been going, but I hope you’ll do well on the holidays. I’m well prepared for Christmas and not at all behind on my gifts.

Also, I can wait for you to find the motivation and heart to do Dragonheart again after the holidays are over.
12/19/2020 c22 3mdauben
I'm sorry this isn't a new chapter, but I totally get how real life can be some times. Try to relax, take care of yourself, and enjoy the holidays and your birthday! The writing can wait until you have the time and motivation again.
12/1/2020 c12 1ArthurWheeler
Just finished chapter 12... This is getting good. I really enjoyed all of the set-up and seeing the relationships develop between Rayla, Callum, Claudia and Soren. It made the events of this chapter ask the better. Excited to keep reading.
11/28/2020 c21 8Wildgirl6
Now we have the couple of chapters that focused on our band of misfit heroes and came after chapter 18, we’ll get to see Amaya, Gren, Siveth and, -UGH- Viren again in the next chapter and we’ll get to see who might reach the heroes first.
11/24/2020 c21 14twilightnite13
Damnit... humans are the worse after how they were saved from that dark witch...
11/20/2020 c8 1ArthurWheeler
Just finished chapter 8. That was wonderful. So just curious if the line "everyone is looking at us... Don't worry about them its just you and me right now" was an Easter Egg from ATLA episode "the headband" if so very nice! I was thrilled reading the dance scene and everything leading up to it it just all feels to genuine... Also picking up on some hints of Callum's future connection to the sky primal with the "being one with the wind" and the "electric" touch... Really enjoying the subtle build and gearing up for what it is to come! Thank you!

PS what is up with the Birds landing on Callum... getting the hint that there might also be a connection happening there.

Also love the Soren and Callum dynamic especially when Callum is pushed into the dance by Soren.

5 stars
11/19/2020 c1 4Dragonholic
i've seen dragonheart and so far so good with this story and rip sean connery
11/18/2020 c5 1ArthurWheeler
Excellent, I am just finished chapter 5 and am eagerly looking forward to reading more. I think you accomplish what few fanfics do well by capturing the cannon on the characters personalities. Then applying how they would really behave in your great alternative story line. I am really enjoying the mystery of Rayla's memory loss. I also think your gradual build of Rayllum sweetness is perfectly balanced. The cherry on top of this story for me so far is moments between Harrow and Rayla that hasn't been explored before that gives this story a really nice touch. Thank you!
11/1/2020 c20 8Radu24maior
I got no words, that how good your story is.
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