5/25/2020 c1 46Fanfic girl of all worlds
Again the first portion had a couple grammar errors. Game instead of lame and her was used in a confusing manner when they talked about her leg.
Also it rushed into the action and in my opinion gave too much away at the beginning.
I have watched the Netflix version and honestly I think it is a gruesome thing but despite the errors this does show potential, and I do so love an oc insert transformation story.
Again the first portion had a couple grammar errors. Game instead of lame and her was used in a confusing manner when they talked about her leg.
Also it rushed into the action and in my opinion gave too much away at the beginning.
I have watched the Netflix version and honestly I think it is a gruesome thing but despite the errors this does show potential, and I do so love an oc insert transformation story.
4/17/2020 c1 3Coney cuniculus
Intriguing first chapter. Joy's past is pretty tragic, and her having a lame leg is pretty interesting. I can't wait to see where the story leads!
Intriguing first chapter. Joy's past is pretty tragic, and her having a lame leg is pretty interesting. I can't wait to see where the story leads!
4/17/2020 c1 6Chipster-roo
Hey, I remember this! Fox Teen posted this story for you several years ago (that version appears deleted now though). This chapter is a good beginning; Joy Waters seems like a nice character.
Looking forward to more chapters! If I remember correctly, Prince Rainbow will take the form of one of the Sandleford rabbits? (can't remember which one though.)
Hey, I remember this! Fox Teen posted this story for you several years ago (that version appears deleted now though). This chapter is a good beginning; Joy Waters seems like a nice character.
Looking forward to more chapters! If I remember correctly, Prince Rainbow will take the form of one of the Sandleford rabbits? (can't remember which one though.)
4/14/2020 c1 45Drewmoviefan
Love the intro, especially Joy's intro about her leg. This will be interesting to see!
Love the intro, especially Joy's intro about her leg. This will be interesting to see!