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5/25/2020 c1 46Fanfic girl of all worlds
Again the first portion had a couple grammar errors. Game instead of lame and her was used in a confusing manner when they talked about her leg.
Also it rushed into the action and in my opinion gave too much away at the beginning.
I have watched the Netflix version and honestly I think it is a gruesome thing but despite the errors this does show potential, and I do so love an oc insert transformation story.
4/17/2020 c1 3Coney cuniculus
Intriguing first chapter. Joy's past is pretty tragic, and her having a lame leg is pretty interesting. I can't wait to see where the story leads!
4/17/2020 c1 6Chipster-roo
Hey, I remember this! Fox Teen posted this story for you several years ago (that version appears deleted now though). This chapter is a good beginning; Joy Waters seems like a nice character.

Looking forward to more chapters! If I remember correctly, Prince Rainbow will take the form of one of the Sandleford rabbits? (can't remember which one though.)
4/14/2020 c1 45Drewmoviefan
Love the intro, especially Joy's intro about her leg. This will be interesting to see!

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