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1/2 c20 2AnonSnowing
I am going to call this version of Jekyll Dr. Monster for now. He is a monster, that should have never got that funding or clearing. Unfortunately that does happen in real life.
Yeah Emma needs to find this man! Soon or there going to be casualties and it wouldn't be only Anton and Henry.
Yep definitely not an ordinary farm. Farmers normally don't have armed guards stationed around their property. Definitely where Dr. Monster is torturing innocent people.
Huh oh they're relocating.
At least Killian seem to believed Emma.
Glad they escaped from literally death!
David is his family's hero *Smiles*.
Yep a father trying to save his son.
Didn't David already met Mr. Gold when the plane arrived back and then later when the plane exploded?
Yep he's the mystery financial advisor!
Too bad he didn't made any progress with Vance.
Man David must have seem like a superhero to Margaret at this moment, like many moments out through their life! He is a superhero to Margaret for sure *smiles*.
Oh no it's stopped at the moment because they are relocating.
Yep they moved. Darn it!
Aww Nolan family all cuddled up together in bed!
David did not fail he did what he could do at the moment.
Yep horrible Dr. Monster.
Great chapter! Thank you!
1/2 c20 AnonSnowing
One of my wishes is you writing David (in any of your fics) saying sweet things to Margaret/Snow in a different language! Please do it! At least once! When it's make sense of course. It's now my headcanon that David still remembers how to say I love you and hey beautiful in French! I like to think right after learning those that what he said to Margaret! Like at the lockers or something. Then of course that leads to making out. Maybe after school Margaret helps David study for it and that leads to more making out!
Let say mathematics is where he got most of his straight As' lol. He got As and Bs in the other subjects.
12/28/2020 c20 Number Ten
God, what are these monsters trying to accomplish. I’m glad Killian is trusting Emma’s instincts. It’s definitely not over
12/29/2020 c20 21sexystarwarslover
LOVING THIS! it's reminding me how much I love Manifest and this new version done OUAT style
"Here comes part 2
This doctor is a real monster - he doesn't care if they live or die
"cold and unfeeling" that's for sure
Poor Henry - least's he's out of the danger zone
I think its time you told him the truth Emma
If they don't want anyone coming near the property that's suspicious already
Emma didn't mean to ruin your career she feels guilty for that
"Bloody hell" I hear Colin's voice every time hear Hook say that
David's going to be a hero
"you didn't have to hide it you know this thing" ah ha I knew it
never betray her trust because he's still in love with her
oooh David's going to see Vance hope Gold is there
"another man there and attempted to place him" hmm Gold?
Ah it is Gold!
you've been meeting with Jefferson his associate
see Gold will take care of the situation - thank you Gold!
Henry's awake yes!
I think Gold did it again but who called the doctor?
aw David will always ensure his family comes first
Emma and Killian will be on the case love it
"resume our operations" ah Henrys going to be still in danger these monsters need to stopped and the passengers need to be rescued
12/29/2020 c20 Grace5231973
Glad Henry is okay for now.
12/29/2020 c19 Grace5231973
Those poor people and Henry feeling their pain! Just awful! I hope they find them quick!
12/28/2020 c20 1baratta.jennifer
Awesome chapter!
12/28/2020 c20 595Ghostwriter
Ooh Vance is on the case. It'll be interesting to see whether he's a good guy or a bad guy. (I've never seen Manifest so this is all new to me). Keep up the great work.
12/14/2020 c19 Number Ten
Henry is feeling the pain of another passenger. What was the other Spanish word he said? Poor kid, I hope he'll be okay. Emma is finally letting Killian in on this, which is good, they're building a real team here.

What the hell are these scientists doing to these passengers.

I love Gold doing crosswords, it's what I would do in boring meetings about conspiracy and theoretical ideas
12/15/2020 c19 21sexystarwarslover
I heard Killian's voice in my head at the last part "one of these days I gotta stop chasing this woman" ha never!
"Off Radar" and it's a part 1 - it's a fitting title for what happened in this chapter!
Emma just called David an egg head hehe
David learned French *fans self* he just got sexier and sexier
"he was too busy making out with your mom" he sure was
uh oh I know what's happening to Henry
Gold is reading a crossword book ha!
extra terrestrials? what?
Killian wouldn't betray Emma - sorry Vance
uh oh the passengers who didn't have anyone to reunite with that's so sad
oooh Dr Whale is here *sniggers*
"please tell me there is another doctor available" oh I wonder if there was a date here one time
I know what's causing Henry's temperature they need to find that passenger
*gasps* Its Anton!
it is weird that the shelter doesn't exist
"Killian has always been trustworthy" listen to David!
Help them Killian yay!
pff what do those nurses know - Mary and David are there for each other and their son is sick
"A rock and a hard place" you said David
Exactly Killian! 10 missing passengers that's suspicious
BINGO! Emma and Killian are on the case
aw Regina's being a good doctor and aunt to Henry
Emma and Killian on the job and Killian just can't let Emma go alone they make a great duo!
12/15/2020 c19 2AnonSnowing
Scientists trying to figure out the plane reappearing... yeah it's quite a doody. I support the time travel or wormhole theory. Or maybe it was Margaret's prayers... and with Ruth's help, in heaven, pleading to God to make them back to life. What if they actually died and was in Heaven but they don't remember it? and the callings are tests for them to see if they are truly deserving of a second chance of life! I don't know... but that would be intriguing. That's similar to the phoenix theory.
Poor people... they had no one that came for them...
Whale... yeah kinda awkward and a reminder of those five years.
I hope Henry is going to be ok! And yep I think it's a connection to Anton Garcia.
Huh oh... that's terrible!
I know where Anton is... in that place with that mad scientist!
Necesitan darse prisa! (Yes I google translate it and it's they need to hurry!).
I hope Killian believe her.
Aww Margaret sitting in David's lap *smiles* but I feel for her too. Margaret is not losing Henry again!
Heartwrenching.
I wonder if David knew that Margaret has went on two dates with Whale and he had almost took advantage of her?
Yep a rock and a hard place.
Huh oh one of those vans weren't registered suspicious...
Wait BESPECTACLED doctor? Is that whose I think it is!? At least a version of him.
It's has to be him! (JEKYLL!) Unless there was a bespectacled doctor on the show that was doing this to those poor people.
Poor Anton...
And poor Henry!
I feel like Whale is being a bit careless.
Aww... Regina already love her new nephew *smiles*.
Yep they need to go find that van!
Good job! Thank you!
12/15/2020 c19 AnonSnowing
Oohh a two parter! This is chapter 19 next one is 20. I can't believe it you almost to 20 chapters! Congratulations!
So something is off the radar...
Oh I believe that the reason why David doesn't remember much french from high school is because he was too busy making out with Margaret lol.
Cool Margaret knows ASL! That's really nice for her deaf students to have a teacher that knows sign language. Especially since they usually have asl interpreters for them in public school.
Oh no poor Henry! I google checked ayudame and it's help me in spanish. Somebody needs help and I have a feeling it's not really Henry per say. Tho he does need help too.
12/14/2020 c19 1baratta.jennifer
Outstanding chapter!
12/14/2020 c19 595Ghostwriter
Oh wow. Government coverup at it's finest. Awesome job. Well done.
12/6/2020 c18 2AnonSnowing
Thank you for another good response!
Ohh... little Olive waiting for his twin. So adorable *smiles*. But argh... little does she knew it would be a lot longer than a few minutes. Bittersweet.
And Margaret so anixous of course... My heart breaks for them knowing what they will soon finds out.
At least they will be back in five years!
Oohh Margaret's screams... Heartwrenching.
Aww... that selfie David sent her was probably what she needed at that moment from remembering that horrible day. *Smiles*.
Yeah thank you to whatever force that cause them to return!
I am so glad they had a great time at Coney Island!
Yep it's all connected! Henry is leading David to something. Henry's callings are different!
Henry so adorable too *smiles* but yeah bad idea to run off like that.
Huh oh where is Bethany...
Bethany is arrested!
*Sighs* Reporters are still outside their house!
Aww! Of course Margaret trusts David more! *Smiles*.
I get why she wants Lance and Olive's friendship to fade out.
Yep Olive only have one dad *smiles*.
I hope Bethany go free soon!
The Nolans are very tight knit! Part of it is probably because of David and Margaret's love. Yeah I don't think the passengers chose to be away from their loved ones for years.
Ohh Margaret... ouch. She couldn't help herself and listening to David and her's song... ouch. Those lyrics are exactly what she was feeling then.
That was exactly a year ago... wow how much things has changed! I wonder what Margaret a year ago would have thought if someone told her that David, Henry and Emma will returns?
And now the song makes her happy because David came back! *smiles*.
*Fans self* David singing softy into her ear!
Yep Margaret waited for him *smiles*.
Aww! Dancing together!
Aww sweet flashback! I love their love story *smiles*.
Love that Margaret is watching him work! She definitely enjoys it.
Yep all connected...
Wonderful chapter thank you!
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