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10/22/2020 c9 1merendinoemiliano
Really interesting and detailed job, glad you're making more effort in describing the techniques
10/21/2020 c9 nightmaster000
Another wonderful chapter with the princesses of Ooo invited to Ice King's wedding, and as we see it's not a invitation they got the chance to decline.

Though one wonders what angle Mal is working there by kidnapping the princesses of Ooo and Marceline, spiriting them away to the Ice King's little wedding, look forward to finding out.

Also great scene with Courtney and Heather further showing that teamwork is not the dark keybladers strong suit, and also further showing that Mal makes everyone nervous to say the least.

Anyway we see that Ice King's bride to be is a cursed Leshawna and this means trouble for Ice King since this isn't going to fly with any of them. Hopefully they won't give him too bad of a beating for this stunt.
7/28/2020 c8 9GREAT CELESTIAL-DRAGON
Cool chapter, sorry it took so long but enjoyed the battles between the evil and heroic teams. And now Gwen is in adventure time which she’ll find is bizarre and crazy and will no doubt meet another familiar face if i remember form the original.
7/19/2020 c8 1merendinoemiliano
Pretty good dialogues
7/19/2020 c8 nightmaster000
Brilliant chapter with some excellent reunions both good and bad, and with some awesome action to boot. :)
7/19/2020 c8 Knight
In Chris’ intro he talks about Zoey and the heroes of Megaville fighting Heartless and a dragon, and shows the scene where Bell meets Mojo-Jojo, all scenes from your original chapter 7, but you took those scenes out of your rewritten chapter 7.
7/19/2020 c8 Guest
Chris’ intro talks about Brick being found along with the soldiers of project Freelancer like in your original version but you haven’t posted the Agent Muskoka chapter in the rewritten version.
6/30/2020 c7 9GREAT CELESTIAL-DRAGON
Awesome work! Quite curious to find out what became of Zoey in this version and if she will still be a keyblade user. :)
6/28/2020 c7 1merendinoemiliano
Pretty cool fight and good introspection, Trough I hope to see also the most physical moves like zanzetsuken
6/27/2020 c7 nightmaster000
A very enjoyable chapter and conclusion for the world of Atmos, with a really awesome fight between Terra and Master Cyclonis herself. :)

Of course Mike isn't left out of the action as we see him come head to head with a boss Unversed consequently stopping him reaching Terra, both were great fights all around.

I also enjoyed that little flashback at the start with Gwen learning of the Keyblade Inheritance Ceremony from Master Eraqus. Which will certainly play a important role later on no doubt.

All together another wonderful chapter, though I think I did spot one small error. As wasn't it Vincent Van Ghoul who Eraqus got word from, not Madame Web? I'll admit could be wrong of course but wanted to point it out just in case.
6/12/2020 c6 Guest
Wait, Pumyra a Princesses of Heart? But none of the girls in Chapter 1 match her description.
6/11/2020 c6 40Eternal Nexus Warrior
This is exciting! I remember the first version and a few weeks back while i was rereading the first story, I thought how I wished this story continued. I got my wish.
6/5/2020 c6 nightmaster000
Another excellent chapter. :)

I quite enjoy how things are playing out so far with Mumm-Ra it seems taking Maleficent's place in the Kingdom Hearts grand scheme of thing. One can only wonder what kinda of butterfly effect that will have on things.

Plus we see Mike and Grwen arrive on Atmos and Ooo respectively, and it seems Gwen is in for a unwanted reunion. All together great chapter and look forward to what happens next. :)
6/5/2020 c6 Matt
Nice though there are some mistakes in this story. Like Mal never tried to eat Zoey.
6/4/2020 c3 Matt
Oh boy the psycho Xehanort. He’s as bad as Mal.
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