10/30 c26 Guest
Just realized, Fiona, the sheep faunus’s semblances is almost like Kamui. Think on that.
Just realized, Fiona, the sheep faunus’s semblances is almost like Kamui. Think on that.
10/26 c4 Leurunner
The story jumps and cuts in seemingly random intervalls, making it very hard to follow.
The story jumps and cuts in seemingly random intervalls, making it very hard to follow.
10/11 c23 1SnowShiro-Kitsune14
I really like this story, it’s interesting, different, and most of all, Obito-centered.
The only thing that I’m uncertain with is...the pairing. IS there a pairing? With Obito or Kakashi? Honestly, I’d prefer if there wasn’t and it’ll just be friendship and family relationships. There’s not much multi chaptered crossover gen fics with Obito and I was really happy to find this and seeing no mention of pairings.
I really like this story, it’s interesting, different, and most of all, Obito-centered.
The only thing that I’m uncertain with is...the pairing. IS there a pairing? With Obito or Kakashi? Honestly, I’d prefer if there wasn’t and it’ll just be friendship and family relationships. There’s not much multi chaptered crossover gen fics with Obito and I was really happy to find this and seeing no mention of pairings.
10/8 c6 JustDusty
The more characters from Naruto you're dropping here the less fucking relevant RWBY events are becoming. Cinder is already under Danzo's control. This is turning into a goddamn war between shinobi. At this point, you might as well just drop the entire fucking Naruto cast and be done with it. Good job ruining a perfectly good story
The more characters from Naruto you're dropping here the less fucking relevant RWBY events are becoming. Cinder is already under Danzo's control. This is turning into a goddamn war between shinobi. At this point, you might as well just drop the entire fucking Naruto cast and be done with it. Good job ruining a perfectly good story
10/8 c5 JustDusty
If you bring anyone other than Danzo to this story i'm dropping it. Obito already twisted Aura as it is and if you start bringing everybody else here it's going to get boring really really fast
If you bring anyone other than Danzo to this story i'm dropping it. Obito already twisted Aura as it is and if you start bringing everybody else here it's going to get boring really really fast
10/8 c1 JustDusty
For fucks sake of course some higher entity is dictating Obito's life even after all the shit he went through in his past because of some stupid sense of righteousness
For fucks sake of course some higher entity is dictating Obito's life even after all the shit he went through in his past because of some stupid sense of righteousness
8/4 c1 Korst
What a travesty, this is so disjointedly written that I have no idea what's going on and don't care enough to put in the effort to piece it together. Feels too much like work.
What a travesty, this is so disjointedly written that I have no idea what's going on and don't care enough to put in the effort to piece it together. Feels too much like work.
7/24 c2 TheGreatDoaistDumpling
2 chapters in and I just can’t read it any more, it jumps all over the place I feel like it has no time stamps and that the timeline of the story is absolutely fucked because of that. I get lost in whats happening because it goes from having a scene at present to having a scene with junior in which I am unsure if its in the past or present
2 chapters in and I just can’t read it any more, it jumps all over the place I feel like it has no time stamps and that the timeline of the story is absolutely fucked because of that. I get lost in whats happening because it goes from having a scene at present to having a scene with junior in which I am unsure if its in the past or present