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5/13/2020 c1 120Razer Athane
Every time I think you might've stopped writing Tekken fanfics, I pop my head in for a few secs and then BOOM! There you are. The pirate eskimo strikes thunder... ;) (no that was fuckin' awful, I'm sorry lmao)

"The main factor eh was sure of was that peace was never permanent and pressure should never relent." - I adored this, super in tune with Bruce, you've already nailed him.

"The memory was foggy [through to] looming over his bed." - loved loved LOVED this, loved the way the sentence was structured too, felt like flashes of his memory!

"But Bruce had a title and reputation to uphold and he wasn't going to let something like mortality slow him down." - LOL. NICE!

"All this pandering [through to] their fragile existence." - dude wtf where did you pull this from? This is so good!

THAT ENDING LINE! YO YO YO. LOVE IT!

The only constructive criticism I have of this is that there's a paragraph here and there that's really large, because of the sizing I'd been tempted to skim through it and miss out the details (glad I didn't). Might just be a me thing (go on, make the pun), but if it were broken down into two maybe three smaller paragraphs, it would've been easier to digest.

I really enjoyed the imagery you set here and the word choices, Bruce is not a character I really care too much about, but you still pulled me in (as usual, because Thunder's Bruce is Best Bruce). Really enjoyed this introspective, reflective piece.

Looking forward to seeing future fics again. Much love to you as always, Thunder. Keep your spark bright.
5/8/2020 c1 40JunKing
You're back! Loved this piece! Your diction is amazing and the picture you paint is easy to see. Bruce has never been a big favorite of mine but through your works featuring him, I've learned to really enjoy him as a character. This was a different portrayal of the Bruce I imagine, but at the same time, he seems so in character. I could totally see him being this guy. And what's even better is the ironic parallels between this piece and the world we are living in now. My favorite part was seeing how the title came together at the end. It all made sense and you have me excited and looking forward to more! I'm so glad you've returned! Keep up the great work and please continue this!
5/5/2020 c1 Instinct
Finally! Another bruce Irvin story from you! It was a good read. LOL Thanks to you I'm hooked on the Bruce Irvin x anna Williams pairing.

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