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8/2 c8 1Peachykeen23
Hi there! Your story is so great! I like your writing style a lot, and I really like how you've portrayed the characters. You've also done a really good job of weaving in the information regarding Ace and the fire, and I also like how no one knows about Denny yet. Great job! I hope you continue with this story and don't give up on it!
7/10 c8 Lola Vegas
next please
5/18 c8 Guest
please update. your writing is so good.
4/21 c8 fairyfloss88
such a good update. can't wait for more
4/20 c1 Mariiem
Hi. I just have to say I love love love this story. I had a stressful day. Fortunately I found this story and it made me so happy. Please continue 3
3/29 c1 1Entangler
Ooh, nice first chapter. Bit of action, bit of drama, Ace sitting there like a boss, great description of his character - I love it, good job :)
3/25 c7 2wondergirl001
good job!
3/25 c8 wondergirl001
Loved!
3/23 c7 fairyfloss88
i love you story. its so well written
3/18 c7 doodlebugrox
Hope you update soon!
3/18 c7 Guest
This was a good chapter, and I love the lost boys!
1/29 c6 16TheGoofyCat
“You know you’re supposed to drink a shake, right?” Haha love it! I really enjoyed this chapter. I love Penny and Connie’s friendship they bounce off each other really well. I hope you update soon. :)
9/7/2020 c6 2wondergirl001
Omg! Wow! I loved this! What’s gonna happen next? What does Ace have up his sleeve? I’m kinda sad about Eyeball being a jerk but I’m interested to see how you’ll redeem him
8/1/2020 c5 16TheGoofyCat
This story is just my cup of tea. Loved every chapter and the Stephen King quotes, think I might squeal if there’s a Needful Things quote (that’s my favourite of his). I’m usually an Ace girl but this story’s got me diggin’ Eyeball. The dialogue between everyone is great and I like the little twists and turns you throw in (Denny, church fire, etc.) along the way. Absolutely loved when Penelope stink bombed the car that was class :D Can’t wait to see what’s in store next.
6/26/2020 c5 mmc05
its really good. I really like the story and your writing. Can you please please update soon. I really want to see what happens
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