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10/18 c14 RobinW
This is so good! I can't wait for more!
10/15 c1 RobinW
I've only read the first chapterI'm hooked!
7/5/2020 c12 iluvfairytale
This is the first Dean/OC fanfic where I've witnessed so much chemistry. Usually they eventually get admittedly cringey, but somehow you've made them click.
6/28/2020 c12 Mia
I love this so so much. The relationship between Lou and dean is perfect! I cannot wait for future chapters!
6/5/2020 c2 13emilylillian
This story seems so cute! I already love Lou's character and I can't wait to read more.
6/1/2020 c12 Guest
Love the story so far
6/1/2020 c12 23x Hemlock x
I forgot Gordon was still an issue! It makes so much sense that he would go to Lou given what he knows about her and what he knows about Sam, and I’m really happy that you included him! The mental image of Dean leaning cool and casual against the Impala as he watches Lou walk up to him is amazing and drool-worthy. I loved the banter around the scrunchie, and of course Lou has one on her person at all times to whip out when need be. Dean went to grab her bag without having to be asked—like a gentleman—but when he is asked to, he has to make a joke of it, and I don’t know why, but that felt ridiculously in character for him. “He slipped his hands under her coat and clung to her” Those are the best kind of hug! I find it interesting, given her relationship with both men, that Dean waited by the car while Sam went to find Lou in the airport, and the fact that they felt the need to separate says a lot about how rocky their relationship is at the moment. I love the fact that Lou has a guy to fly her places and how easily Lou accepts that there are things Dean won’t tell her. Bed sharing! That’s a trope I’ll never get enough of! This was an emotionally fraught chapter and I loved every moment of it, especially the argument between Sam and Dean and Dean’s acceptance of Lou’s right to secrecy at the end
5/22/2020 c11 x Hemlock x
For such a brief description of Dean, I could picture him perfectly, cute bedhead and all! There’s always this assumption with Dean that he’s dumber than he is even from people who love him, so I really liked Lou’s surprise when he recognised Hebrew—it shows that she doesn’t know everything about him yet. But she does know him well enough to realise that the questions he asked afterwards weren’t about him grilling information out of her, which is probably what a lot of other people would have assumed. And Dean knows Lou really well too! He still slips up from time to time, but he spots his mistake from the barest expression she makes.

“Would Dean agree to leave the room and let her handle it?” probably not.

My favourite part of this chapter, is that Lou expected him to ask about the jar, but instead he asks about her and her reaction to it. Anyone else would have had questions about the demon jar, either for power or knowledge, but not Dean, and I find that very accurate and endearing. A close second favourite is realising how intertwined Dean and Lou’s lives have been without them even realising it.

“The Martha Stewart of hunting” is an amazing line, and I love how well it applies to Lou.

I feel like this is a turning point. Suddenly there are secrets being acknowledged as secrets and lies slipping out (and, oh, Dean’s reaction to catching her in a lie!). You managed to write all this and not give anything away, which is really impressive. You wrote such vivid descriptions of Lou’s pain and the barriers in her mind, so even though you’re not divulging anything just yet, it didn’t feel like you were being coy; it felt natural.

But something’s breaking jars, and I really want to know what it is and why!
5/20/2020 c10 wolfimus prime
Awww that's was a cute chapter! Lou is the most bad ass girl I very seen I would love to meet her in real to bad we well never!
5/20/2020 c10 Guest
I totally had that idea too, when I first started watching the show! Why not just mix a bunch of glue and salt and put it on all the entrances?! It'd make things a lot easier for them. No broken salt lines! :)
5/20/2020 c10 Guest
Absolutely fantastic! Perfect! Just what I needed during this crazy time! I love Lou! I love the level of anticipation you've created! I can't wait to see what's next!
5/16/2020 c10 x Hemlock x
I loved that detail about Dean patting the car goodbye, and then how Lou, later on, does the same—the way he notices her doing it, always paying such close attention, was really cute. Dean getting uncomfortable because of the hotel clerks being nice to him was very fun to imagine! He’s so used to the people working at the places he stays at being cranky and bored, but Lou evidently has higher standards, and I don’t blame her. The way Dean had hoped at the back of his mind that Lou had called him over for a booty call, yet mentally denied it was very in character for him. Lou loving ghost hunting shows is all kinds of wonderful! She definitely deserves to get a giggle out of it. That entire bit with the Ghostfacers! I was half expecting one of them to jump into the other’s arms! It was hilarious! I loved it, and I can’t wait for the next chapter!
5/14/2020 c9 wolfimus prime
When u came a cross this story was pretty couriers about then I have fallen in love! With it I need more chapters to read about this. Hummm her scars on her legs did she face a hell hound ? Is that why she never shoes then
5/13/2020 c9 x Hemlock x
I loved seeing Dean getting all excited and planning out what he was going to say to Lou, going for maximum effect tot get her all flustered, but then she pulls one over on him and wins the innuendo game, proving once and for all that she’s more than a match for him! Dean’s worrying is really cute, though obviously unwarranted. Now is a really good time for the boys to have a demon expert around. Lou is all about efficiency, and I keep imagining her as a Woman of Letters, coordinating a team of hunters from the comfort of her home
5/13/2020 c8 x Hemlock x
Reading this story always makes me want to write more Supernatural! Sam whacking Dean with a newspaper to wake him up was such a brotherly thing to do and a great way to start the chapter. The image of little, season 3 Sam comfortably lounging around in his pyjamas is oddly sweet and cute. This is pre-bunker—at this point, Sam has never had a home, not even a temporary one, yet even though he doesn’t like Lou, he’s comfortable enough to let his guard down and wander around in his PJs. He hasn’t fallen headfirst into hunting yet. A part of him still thinks he’ll get out of the life once he saves Dean, and the ease with which he settles into a semi-domestic routine shows that. Dean “off-handedly” noticing that Lou’s cup hasn’t been used as though hunting hasn’t made him hyper-observant. If it weren’t already entirely obvious that most of the story is told from his narrative, little moments like this would clear any confusion—the way he absolutely has to add that he wasn’t actively looking for clues to Lou’s whereabouts. I also loved how very firm Dean is about not asking Lou about her scars. He had no problem calling Bobby to ask him because he was worried and in his mind, it meant that Lou got to keep her privacy, but asking her directly would no doubt upset her, and he wants to avoid that at all costs. Lou—lovely, soft, sweet Lou—cursing like a sailor is one of my new favourite things! My favourite moment has got to be Lou making angry demands, Dean prudently agreeing to whatever she wants while Sam fearfully declines. Right after that is another favourite: Lou having a bad day—a normal, relatable bad day. She says it isn’t up there with a bad day hunting, but she doesn’t belittle her feelings, she doesn’t berate herself because it could have been worse so there’s nothing to complain about. She makes it clear that having a bad day, no matter the scale, is valid. That bit of teasing when they enter the restaurant was really cute as was Dean asking Lou if they should set Marty straight. He asked for her opinion! He didn’t just go ahead and do it! Bobby being a lady’s man is only of my favourite little bits from canon!
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