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1/3 c22 Shikyo no Kyoufu
Oh god they have fully dragged Presea into the silly corner.
12/28/2020 c21 VocalVenom
I was so excited to see this story updated again! Oh gosh, Sheena's not gonna like what happened to Corrine...
12/23/2020 c21 8Maxxus Herald
Not going to lie, I'm kind of shipping Edie and Raine super hard. No no, don't confirm or deny it until something does or does not happen in the story. I'm fine with fantasizing for now. X3

Any plans to continue into Dawn of the New World once this is complete? Maybe do something for the two year gap between games? 3
12/21/2020 c21 Azelas
This is a great story! I really like how your character involves Raine in many decisions. Other stories have her super suspicious of the the OC because they don't tell the truth.
12/10/2020 c21 Shikyo no Kyoufu
Did...did she somehow make Verius?! Why is Edie always doing weird things?! I mean its funny but why?
12/3/2020 c20 Pecan Crisp
It says a lot about this story that I am interested enough in it to keep reading despite the random bouts of anti-white people rhetoric. It helps that it's not the most heavy-handed that I've seen, I guess.
Honestly, hearing things like that makes me glad I'm not white, because I would hate having society demand I feel sorry for what my dead ancestors did.
11/24/2020 c1 1xkurakurax
i don’t appreciate how my ff cut off my review and i don’t even remember what i said. i just know that i’m jealous because i’ve been writing my own SI for some time (years, but it’s not really a SI? more an OC-insert), and here this magnificent story is, trampling mine into the dirt. QQ you did the whole “memories changing to fit the body” thing better than i ever could. it came in so smooth. imagine seeing a mold that looks like you.
11/24/2020 c19 xkurakurax
damn, this story is enjoyable. that reveal was coming but still unexpected. so does she really tell them that she’s from earth? it seems she kinda glossed over that part. and seeing that they look alike, does that make them distant cousins or something? it’s really weird, lol. and you said she wasn’t gonna be bad ass again. uhm, hello!? she took down vharley way easy and some two knights before she got help. i’d say she was bad ass again in this chapter.
11/24/2020 c17 xkurakurax
awh, that birthday song was so cute! did you make it up? or, i feel like i’ve heard it in cold stone once. one line though. i’m too broke to have gone throwing tops fer all of it, lmfao.
11/23/2020 c18 xkurakurax
wait, this teleportation skill. is it the same method that mithos and them use to go from derris kharlan to wherever and vice versa? if it is, i’m stupid for not realizing sooner, smh.
11/23/2020 c17 xkurakurax
did she really say waluigi? lmfao.

anyway! so we get the juice! no wonder yuan acted like that! yunno, he’s one of my fave characters-maybe even more than lloyd and kratos-so his actions always stick out more to me whenever ppl bring him into the story-and do it WELL-so the disgusted thing back in chapter one or two stuck with me from the beginning. then the FONDNESS (idc how vague!). i didn’t connect the dots, stupid me, but now it makes sense! now! how and why did she end up in a martel clone, if it is a martel clone. no one has ever expanded on that, not even the game! i love this!

you also took an idea that i had-well, not took since you wrote it first-but i’ve been working on a fic where an oc of mine got inserted into ToS, too, and slowly they forgot that they were even from earth. i’ve been working on it for years, but it can never come out right. i’m jealous. yer doing it way better than i can ever hope for.
11/21/2020 c11 xkurakurax
so i’m still interested to know about edie. why did yuan look at her like that? and who was the half-elf before edie found herself inside of their body?
9/25/2020 c19 Ibiolizard
Your fanfiction is a tad rough around the edges, but it's very good and I like it a lot. I don't really go out of my way to read Tales of Symphonia stories, but I found yours to be very interesting.
Your story has a few confusing transitions, and a could use a beta to cross check for grammatical errors. Besides that I found your story really good, and I can't wait to see how the story continues!
9/23/2020 c19 Shikyo no Kyoufu
I knew it! Zelos was the SI the whole time!
9/20/2020 c18 2OkamiGamer
You are *spoiling* me with all these new chapters. I absolutely love everything about this fanfic! They writing style, characterization, humour, pacing etc all top notch! Thank you so much for writing this.
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