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4/23/2020 c1 L.J Heywood
Great work so far. Beautiful, exquisite, sublime, elegant writing, as usual. I'm enjoying the concept of a young and inexperienced Cenobite under the Prince's teachings being obsessed and consumed by the idea of love, innocence, and purity. And yes, I caught the oh-so-subtle Pinsty hint. You make mention of no names, but it's clear as to what, or who, Pinhead is referring to when he warns the Cenobite of his own experiences with this emotion. I hope there will be more Pinsty references and nods as the story goes along.

I'm liking the OC Cenobite, too. I'm not usually keen on OC-driven HR stories, but sometimes there are diamonds in the rough. Will we get a full description of his appearance and his mutilations?

Good job, Inky. Looking forward to the next chapter.

- Laura

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