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1h c11 Akira-Hayama
Don’t think anyone’s gonna be saying this’ll be their year after last year, lol. Here’s to indeed hoping 2021 will be better, although it’s not off to the best of starts so far...

Anyways, I’d say it’s better that Peter decided to tell Felicia than letting it fester inside, but she found out anyways, coz wifey powers, lol. Despite the circumstances, actually pretty sweet how Felicia just knows it isn’t Peter that’s responsible for Kraven’s ‘demise’. Highly doubt Kraven is dead. Until a body is found, he’s still 50/50.

Can’t wait for the Felicia and May interaction though. If there’s someone else that can get through to Peter, it’d definitely be his aunt too. She knows how stubborn he is since the beginning. Plus, family interactions are always nice.

Ah, and we’re getting to the part where Eddie comes into contact with the Symbiote. All in all, don’t know why he was having a pity party for himself. He had everything fully deserved, but I guess this is where he’ll take his revenge if he does get the Symbiote next chapter.

Great chapter overall. Till next time!
2h c11 Jay Youngblood
OH NO are we getting spiderman 3 vibes here do I smell a venom and Kraven team up soon
1/1 c10 9A guy with a big imagination
I remember in your Mysterio story that you said you were looking for ideas on how to do more SpiderCat well, I think I might be able to help, see I've been thinking about writing my own version of Spiderman 3 and I was wondering if after I was done with it you could write a SpiderCat version of it as if it took place in the chosen path universe?
12/25/2020 c10 31NeoTyson
Merry Christmas! The symbiote is getting closer to consuming Peter or making him become one with it. Felicia might have to be the one to save her man from the symbiote soon.
12/25/2020 c10 Akira-Hayama
I like that Felicia is probably the sane one in this relationship right now. Probably the only one to get Peter to see reason with the Symbiote influence on him. But yeah, seems like Peter’s gone down a dark path at the moment with Kraven’s supposed death.

Feel like this might put a strain on Peter and Felicia’s relationship if the latter finds out, and then Peter’s fully screwed if something happens between them.

Great chapter overall. Till next time!
12/25/2020 c10 2nataku2709
Nice chapter, hope Peter and the symbiote become one finally
12/24/2020 c10 Jay Youngblood
Oh My Gosh I didn't think peter would have done that I'm happy black cat wasn't there but I wonder how's she's going to react if she finds out
12/9/2020 c9 31NeoTyson
I like this version of Eddie getting expose, I don't know why specifically but it felt better to me. The symbiote is getting a bit bossy about becoming one now so we will have to see if PEter turns it down or Felici about to get a new change in her life. I feel like the site hasn't been notifying people when story updates as well for I notice I had a lack of reviews with another story I updated recently.

I still have the draft for the story but I'm not fully up to returning to it but down the road is a maybe.
12/9/2020 c9 Akira-Hayama
Why did I low-key want Peter to dance as soon as he went out that door after that confrontation? Would’ve been iconic, lol. And the Symbiote be really changing Peter’s outlook on things like Eddie’s ‘misfortune’. Schadenfreude, but it’s not like he didn’t deserve what was coming to him. Obviously not the last we’ll see of him, if that ending was an indication.

Symbiote be tempting him though, as well as using Felicia as a bargaining. Though if Felicia has anything to say, she’s very much aware of what’s going on with Peter, but just hasn’t pinpointed yet. Wifey be looking out for the husband.

Think one of the main reasons to their similarities would be their responsibilities. Individually, they both had to go through some shit when they were young, and it progressed to their adulthood. Both have also been through some traumatic experiences Peter with Ben’s death, Felicia getting raped. Just key moments. I’m sure there are plenty more.

Great chapter overall. Till next time!
12/9/2020 c9 Lelouch2618
You better watch out Petee
12/9/2020 c9 Spiderfan
Nice chapter, I love Peter's behaviour, that definitely changes from the comics/movies Peter Parker.
I hope Peter will keep the symbiote and fully bond with it, Felicia as her mate She-venom would be a treat too *_*
11/27/2020 c8 Akira-Hayama
Firstly, don’t know why FanFiction never gave me a notification about an update. I swear their notifications are screwing up for me or something, coz I’m getting late ass messages about a story updating, when in fact, it hasn’t, and when it does update, no notification. Could’ve read this earlier, dammit! Jk, jk.

That aside, a nice touch adding Felicia’s backstory in the chapter. Although we’ve heard and seen it many a times in different media, always interesting to see what her life was previously. Might be reaching a bit, but I can see some similarities between hers and Peter’s lifestyle, despite the obvious difference in class. I suppose opposites do attract, in some cases.

Also gotta appreciate a chapter with Felicia POV. I do enjoy these moments where she’s just in the spotlight, and showing how she can handle herself and why she’s the partner of Spider-Man.

Ngl, I kinda lowkey find the Peter and Venom interaction entertaining. Very much reminds me of how Eddie interacted with it in ‘Venom’, which I suppose you took inspiration from, if that moment of the Symbiote wanting to make Felicia one with them a few chapters ago wasn’t reminiscent to that scene with Eddie and Annie, don’t know what is, lol.

Everything seems to be going smoothly with what they went to do, which means shit will probably go down somewhere down the line. For now, Eddie’s been caught, and Peter got the antidote.

Great chapter overall. Till next time!
11/26/2020 c8 NeoTyson
Nice backstory segment for Felicia, as usual, I enjoy the way you giving her time to shine. The symbiote made think to its self that it's friendly but its actions speak otherwise. Back when I first started writing Fanfics I did tempt to do SpiderCat base off TAS but my inexperience in writing had me stop but maybe in the future I would revisit doing it. Off to check out your other story.
11/19/2020 c7 Lelouch2618
And happy belated birthday
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