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12/28/2020 c21 13Model Builder
I admire the level of detail in this chapter to enrich the story; from the effectiveness of modern medicine against an older strain of tuberculosis, to the method to the Duke's apparent madness and callousness. (To say nothing of why he didn't use the full power of the Dark One in OUAT canon to end the Ogre War.)

I also give this chapter high marks for the way the story of Captain Hook is interwoven into the narrative. (Why, O WHY didn't the OUAT writers think of showing us this detail, themselves . . . ?)

Thank you for sharing your attention to detail, as well as your vivid imagination!
12/28/2020 c21 1baratta.jennifer
Awesome chapter!
12/24/2020 c20 Grace5231973
Wow! Rumple is in a real pickle! Bae may end up in WWI! My grandfather was in that war. I look forward to the next chapter!
12/10/2020 c20 13Model Builder
I really like it when a story draws you in well enough to smell the gunpowder, turmeric and honey. The details provided in this chapter and the character interactions made me feel more like an observer than a reader. I can also feel Rumple's anxiety as he ruminates over the upcoming Great War, and wondering if he really did Bae any favor bringing him to Our World.

I'm looking forward to reading more!
12/9/2020 c20 1baratta.jennifer
Awesome chapter!
11/18/2020 c19 Grace5231973
Thankfully they both have jobs! Rumple certainly is a spinner of tales!
The last sentence was ominous and I wonder what happened to Bae or what will happen.
11/17/2020 c19 13Model Builder
I was most impressed with the imagery provided by this chapter; especially of Rumple's and Bae's time in Victorian London. From my own historical research, I can appreciate things like the bread flour being "cut" and the "doss houses" and "penny-hangs."

I also enjoyed the 'backstory' you devised for Rumple, and how you covered their differing accents.

Again, thanks for keeping OUAT alive and well!
11/16/2020 c19 1baratta.jennifer
Awesome chapter!
10/29/2020 c18 Grace5231973
Dann Zoso! Dann that Zelena too! I am happy to see Emma and Rumple talking. I wish we had that on the show.
10/28/2020 c18 13Model Builder
It appears that history is about to repeat itself, one way or the other. I can't say for sure who is worse; Hordor or Zoso. (That said, Zoso IS the Dark One. What's Hordor's excuse . . . ?)
10/28/2020 c18 Jennifer Baratta
Outstanding chapter!
10/16/2020 c17 Model Builder
The intrigue, plans and counter-plans laid out in this chapter were well done; especially those of Zoso, who clearly thinks several steps ahead of Rumple. So, while I may fully sympathize with Rumple's last sentiment, I have the sneaking suspicion that Zoso is pulling all the strings . . . .
10/15/2020 c17 Jennifer Baratta
Outstanding chapter
10/15/2020 c17 Grace5231973
Zoso is too smart and too cruel! I would love to see Rumple outsmart him!
In the present time, I wonder what is wrong with Rumple?
9/29/2020 c16 Model Builder
Talk about jumping out of the frying pan and into the fire! I don't know what Older Rumple and Zoso have planned, but I hope it works. (Though, considering that it was Zoso who came up with the idea . . . .)

Don't worry about your terminology. Accurate terminology adds to the verisimilitude of your story. "orifice" in this context is no more "risque" than "barbican gate" or "portcullis."

I say, "Job well done!"
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