5/28/2020 c5 prp8383
Haha walking in half naked was cute.
My one critique is that I felt your use of their nicknames/short names seem off. I do understand part of it is their thoughts.
I just feel a Witter should of been a Pacey and vise versa. Sane with Jo/Joey and Potter.
Haha walking in half naked was cute.
My one critique is that I felt your use of their nicknames/short names seem off. I do understand part of it is their thoughts.
I just feel a Witter should of been a Pacey and vise versa. Sane with Jo/Joey and Potter.