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5/22/2020 c1 435Irhaboggles
Awwww, another cute one! Of course I like the play on the phrase "waiting for dawn" but I like the idea of DM just being so consumed by her that all he does is think about and wait for her. I also like how you chose the setting of a local part. IDK why, but it was a nice touch. And I love the "I notice one owner, one pet. One hulking bear, one deceptively innocent poodle." That was a nice line. And the idea of them being at the park just to mess with the pigeons was so funny because I can 100% see it happening. Very in-character. And of course, the ending was sweet too, DM and Penfold finally intervening, but while the latter has a basic "Let's stop them!" mentality, of course the former has ulterior motives for running after Dawn. Very cute! Brilliant work, as always!
5/21/2020 c1 41Generation's Incarnation
Stopping Dawn all because she was frightening the pigeons? Oh, FFS, DM’s enforcement reminds me of that scene near the end of the Spice World movie when the police mentioned something similar in one of the Girls’ charges outside of Albert Hall.
5/21/2020 c1 brave kid
whoa great job

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