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5/22/2020 c1 435Irhaboggles
Awwwww, cute! It's nice to see that Dawn dreams of DM, and of him chasing her. But of course her heart's truest desire is to see him in front of her rather than behind. That was a nice touch! And I like how you remind us all that behind the facade of a sweet little girl, she's the daughter of a brilliant man and all that cunning belongs to her too. Nice work!
5/20/2020 c1 brave kid
whoa great job on this buddy
5/20/2020 c1 41Generation's Incarnation
I’m getting to love Dawn’s inner thoughts of loneliness and longing for DM more and more. Plus, she’s not the only one going through such a withdrawal. And this particular poem has wonderfully visual imagery in her words.

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